Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Pieces of a Heart

I once rebuilt a heart that broke in many pieces...
I gathered them up ,and slowly connected them without 
any creases...

Held them in my hands as some fit together with no trace ...
Others needed some extra care and a soft touch to go in place...

A kiss here and hug there and some tender words I shared...
This fragile heart would soon be strong from another who more
then cared...

Now that this heart is on its own, for path I can never see...
Always remember in your heart, there is still a piece of me...

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2011 at 4:47 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Michael in Frank Herrera's contest "First Love". Love, Carol

Kash Poet April 16, 2011 at 12:57 PM Wonderful write Michael !Congrats on your win---kashinath

Gautami Phookan April 16, 2011 at 5:19 AM Such tender emotions,expressed in beautiful words.Many Congratulations Michael on your win..Liked this one..Gautami

Nette Onclaud April 16, 2011 at 3:39 AM sentimental, michael! i like the tone of this greeat piece.. congrats on the roaring win!:) huggs

Elaine George April 15, 2011 at 7:07 PM That is simply beautiful, Michael. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Joyce Johnson April 15, 2011 at 5:52 PM Very touching poem Michael. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 15, 2011 at 4:43 PM Congrats my Whit Knight on your great win in Frank's contest on luv and kisses and stuff.. with this excellent expressive entry my friend.. enjoy with luv.. as your words make me sing .. your Jersey Girl in luv luv mode..haha..

Sara Kendrick April 15, 2011 at 4:06 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Racquel Grim February 7, 2011 at 9:18 AM This is a really good poem. It's really sweet, I plan on reading a lot more of your poems Michael. Feel free to read mine and let me know what you think. Always, Racquel

Audrey Haick February 2, 2011 at 3:13 PM Very beautifu write from a good, gentle heart. Hope all is well, Michael. Always, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich January 30, 2011 at 10:13 PM So beautiful. I miss so many poems at this place!!

Joseph Sabido January 30, 2011 at 8:20 AM aw. . .personally love this one...reminds me of someone;c

Kay'sha Taylor January 29, 2011 at 2:21 PM awww i loved it friend your ending line is what brung it home ,amazing write !

Christine A Kysely January 29, 2011 at 10:00 AM Wonderful and enjoyable to read...a Big 7...Love it! Christine

James Fraser January 29, 2011 at 8:09 AM Beautifully written from a warm loving heart, a delight to read Michael....:)

Wilma Neels January 29, 2011 at 6:31 AM Your last line really brings this one home.. Another beauty filled with promise Michael.. Love from a hot CT ;)

Sara Kendrick January 29, 2011 at 4:51 AM Great work..Enjoyed reading this one this morn..Your presence at my work delighted my soul..Sara

Sarah Comstock January 28, 2011 at 3:58 PM I almost cried when I read this, it is my new favorite. I feel your pain. A wonderful piece Micheal. Thank you for your sweet comments-- Sarah D Comstock

Sharon Ruebel January 28, 2011 at 3:25 PM Hello Michael, This is so lovely, again the tears. You inspire me. Thank you for you and for visiting me Have a wonderful Weekend. As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 28, 2011 at 2:28 PM Lovely blending of creativity my White Knight.. a perfect poem of romantic elegance and tender passion and emotion ... rebuilding is a big part of life my friend.. we are flying high in the sky headed for Hawaii weekend and the Pro Bowl finally after four hour delay at airport ...soon hot sun and fun and more football luv.. Jersey Girl always thinking of u with luv..