Pieces

"When we feel our lives falling to pieces.
it's best to gather them, place in sunlight...by poet

Pieces of our lives, like jigsaw puzzles,
fitting in places, rejected in some.
If unkind, through those I quickly hustle,
expertly avoiding those with no sun,
selecting those with a long distance run.

Searching for joyfulness I want to keep;
yet, when I look farther, go very deep,
sad pieces fit, catching me unaware
Those only surface when I am asleep,
fitting nicely, their sadness I must bear.

Some are whimsical, at those I can smile,
such lovely colors make happiness spring.
Unique shapes of a life I hope worthwhile.
Shapes of my children, I lovingly bring
Pieces that fit so well, I want to sing.

Now my life puzzle is nearing complete
Many pieces I would love to repeat
Life, like the puzzle, adds pieces with time
A few may be sad, and some bittersweet
Filling each space is a distance we climb.

March 27, 2023
for "Word Challenge-P Words" contest
by Constance La France
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:11 AM
Ann, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Fowler Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 5:40 PM
A lovely metaphorical write Ann. Congratulations on your win! :)
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 9:43 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Ann :) - hugs
George Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 9:01 PM
The comparison of our life to pieces of a jigsaw puzzle is so very apt and we struggle to put them in place. You have written a beautiful poem dear Ann. Congratulations on your first place win.
Lillico  Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 8:45 PM
Congratulations!!!
Alex Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 8:20 PM
"Life, like the puzzle, adds pieces with time" - A very beautiful writing, as a whole. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 4:35 PM
We chose same word but mine was whimsical while yours was deep . Good message. This is funny. When I went to submit my pieces poem, I saw that I had already written a pieces poem around 2012 I think it was. My style was similar to my new poem yet also a bit different. I think people are just wired to pick certain topics and poetry forms that fit them! Oh. Congrats to you here
Peck Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 10:23 AM
I think you're right, and we favor certain words, which I feel I do too often :) Thanks for your comments, Andrea.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 4:18 PM
Dear Ann, It is such a pleasure to read your poem. I totally agree with you - life is a jigsaw puzzle, so many pieces are hard to fit! You have beautifully expressed your thoughts in a perfect poetic form! Congratulations on your fabulous win. Love and BW ~ Mala
Peck Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Dear Mala, Thank you for your lovely words! Life can certainly be a puzzle, especially in today's world! Thanks for commenting :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 2:02 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/quote. Yes, life is like a puzzle. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Peck Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Dear Paula, Thank you for your lovely comments!
Daniel Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 4:59 AM
Double dizains that delight, Ann:) perfect:)
Peck Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 1:53 PM
Thank you, Joanna! I love to write dizains. I like the rhyming scheme.
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 4:43 PM
- All the pieces of life's puzzle are different...a difficult task to complete...lovely written - Best wishes in the contest, Ann :) - hugs
Peck Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 1:57 PM
Thank you, Sunshine! It does seem life is a big puzzle, hard to fit the pieces sometimes.
Turner Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 3:57 PM
I love the quote, Ann. The poem is very creative and well written.a pleasure to read you today.
Peck Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 1:59 PM
Thank you, Daniel! I love that you love the quote. :)
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