Pieces

"When we feel our lives falling to pieces.
it's best to gather them, place in sunlight...by poet

Pieces of our lives, like jigsaw puzzles,
fitting in places, rejected in some.
If unkind, through those I quickly hustle,
expertly avoiding those with no sun,
selecting those with a long distance run.

Searching for joyfulness I want to keep;
yet, when I look farther, go very deep,
sad pieces fit, catching me unaware
Those only surface when I am asleep,
fitting nicely, their sadness I must bear.

Some are whimsical, at those I can smile,
such lovely colors make happiness spring.
Unique shapes of a life I hope worthwhile.
Shapes of my children, I lovingly bring
Pieces that fit so well, I want to sing.

Now my life puzzle is nearing complete
Many pieces I would love to repeat
Life, like the puzzle, adds pieces with time
A few may be sad, and some bittersweet
Filling each space is a distance we climb.

March 27, 2023
for "Word Challenge-P Words" contest
by Constance La France
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 4/3/2023 4:11:00 AM
Ann, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/30/2023 5:40:00 PM
A lovely metaphorical write Ann. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/30/2023 9:43:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Ann :) - hugs
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Date: 3/29/2023 9:01:00 PM
The comparison of our life to pieces of a jigsaw puzzle is so very apt and we struggle to put them in place. You have written a beautiful poem dear Ann. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 3/29/2023 8:45:00 PM
Congratulations!!!
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Date: 3/29/2023 8:20:00 PM
"Life, like the puzzle, adds pieces with time" - A very beautiful writing, as a whole. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/29/2023 4:35:00 PM
We chose same word but mine was whimsical while yours was deep . Good message. This is funny. When I went to submit my pieces poem, I saw that I had already written a pieces poem around 2012 I think it was. My style was similar to my new poem yet also a bit different. I think people are just wired to pick certain topics and poetry forms that fit them! Oh. Congrats to you here
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/31/2023 10:23:00 AM
I think you're right, and we favor certain words, which I feel I do too often :) Thanks for your comments, Andrea.
Date: 3/29/2023 4:18:00 PM
Dear Ann, It is such a pleasure to read your poem. I totally agree with you - life is a jigsaw puzzle, so many pieces are hard to fit! You have beautifully expressed your thoughts in a perfect poetic form! Congratulations on your fabulous win. Love and BW ~ Mala
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/31/2023 10:26:00 AM
Dear Mala, Thank you for your lovely words! Life can certainly be a puzzle, especially in today's world! Thanks for commenting :)
Date: 3/29/2023 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/quote. Yes, life is like a puzzle. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/31/2023 10:28:00 AM
Dear Paula, Thank you for your lovely comments!
Date: 3/28/2023 4:59:00 AM
Double dizains that delight, Ann:) perfect:)
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/28/2023 1:53:00 PM
Thank you, Joanna! I love to write dizains. I like the rhyming scheme.
Date: 3/27/2023 4:43:00 PM
- All the pieces of life's puzzle are different...a difficult task to complete...lovely written - Best wishes in the contest, Ann :) - hugs
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/28/2023 1:57:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine! It does seem life is a big puzzle, hard to fit the pieces sometimes.
Date: 3/27/2023 3:57:00 PM
I love the quote, Ann. The poem is very creative and well written.a pleasure to read you today.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/28/2023 1:59:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel! I love that you love the quote. :)
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