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Piece By Bloody Piece

Compromising regard to life thou being my curse turning my world asunder in your regard I was lesser a presence in whispers You the filch-er stole self the cadence of speech seem as missives reaching a velvet caress raising expectation your delusion no mistruth nectarous phrase dripping love suddenly discord pricks a deceived psyche Thou eyes serpentine gave thee away glinting ego treachery unveiled A crescent moon bandits signal light cloaking and revealing razor sharp talons slicing my psyche demon shadow concealing your gleefulness at arranging its pieces a grotesque disarray your magnum opus the crumbling effigy of my entity plundered dreams shattered to nothingness Still holding portions of self supplanting thee is no question as time rules so my being follows you Piece by bloody piece …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/6/2010 10:08:00 AM
Jayne, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:25:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:25:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jayne >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:27:00 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Jayne. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2009 10:30:00 AM
Powerful and dark Jayne, but your freedom to write shows different you's. If we were all everybodies cup of tea - Wow how boring we would be. I credit all the poets, and i will never cut them down. If Shakespear wrote this - it would be appearing in theatres all over the world - excellent write - and maybe deneith could learn another word instead of Angst - well done>>The Highlander, James..
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Date: 5/26/2009 5:35:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Jayne. I am hoping to see many more poems here written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2009 10:38:00 AM
I Dont fynd it repulsive.I find it very poignant and D-E-E-P.Keep this up!
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Date: 5/25/2009 7:05:00 AM
I gotta say, as articulate and well crafted this is, it's still repulsive. Who would want to read this angst?
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