Pie-In-The-Sky-Dream

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Poetry/Rhyme/Pie-In-The-Sky-Dream
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Written, September 24, 2024
For the International Contest, Pie-In-The-Sky
Sponsor, Suzette Richards, Judged 10/02/2024

Second Place

"Pie-In-The-Sky is an idiom for something that you
hope will happen but is very unlikely to happen."

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So sublime my dream that I want to scream, for a guy who is a sweet offbeat character; he is kind, gentle and helps where he can, this sort of wonderful man appeals to me ! I wish that I could be his forever girl friend, with love to transcend that grows over time.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/2/2024 7:13:00 AM

Super internal rhyming Constance. Congratulations! :)

Constance La France
Date: 10/4/2024 11:40:00 AM

Linda, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, Constance

Suzette Richards

Date: 10/2/2024 6:48:00 AM

Congratulations, Constance, with your 2nd place win in my contest. A pie-in-the-sky for most, I guess, but for a lucky few, it is a blessed reality. Your internal rhymes were spot-on. Regards, Suzette

Constance La France
Date: 10/4/2024 11:41:00 AM

Suzette, thank you for the contest and my wonderful placement and for the congratulations and compliment, Constance

John Read

Date: 9/26/2024 8:58:00 AM

Dreams do come true Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 9/27/2024 1:44:00 PM

John, thank you for the comment, hope so, Constance

Jay Narain

Date: 9/25/2024 10:47:00 AM

Nice poem. Dreams never die.

Constance La France
Date: 9/27/2024 1:45:00 PM

Jay, thank you for the compliment, Constance

Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/25/2024 6:34:00 AM

Dear Constance, this wish is so very had by so many, and so sweet i was broadly smiling by the end. Love the easy flow with its gentle rhymes tat you ink to such a high hope, adding to the effect of the theme. Bravo!

Constance La France
Date: 9/27/2024 1:45:00 PM

Sally, thank you for the nice comment, and compliment, Constance