Picture Perfect

I fondle the brush strokes of a brown afternoon, inviting me along, to the land of down under. I will take a small journey, under gunmetal skies, through country as rough as the crackled veneer. On the trail of the outback, while the afternoon sighs, there are three saddled horses, two men, and their packs. Roustabouts are riding, with the sun at their backs. A pall of white petals drift over their heads, from a rift in the cottonwoods, that frame the river’s bed. I will drink in illusion, as the horses refresh, as they prance through deep waters, on that calm, summer's day. I am thirsty, and eager, to reach out and touch, and to ride in the outback, beneath silver skies, on the one extra horse, that lingers nearby...
________________________________________________________________ Based on the Painting "A Lil' Bit of Aus..." _________________________________________________
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Puddifoot Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 4:47 AM
carrie, this is, as ever, a wonderful piece of writing; some lovely, unexpected wording - "crackled veneer", "a pall of white petals" etc. - really deserving of a much higher placement imo, I would've given it a 1st or 2nd, for sure! :)
Ryerson Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 3:22 AM
Well Carrie, I don't know what to say anymore...I've run out of adjectives...Soup Mail...
Jones Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 6:28 PM
What can I add? You are perfect and I adore and admire your talent
A  Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 9:07 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, CARRIE!! Picture awesome Perfect. LOVE ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 8:04 PM
Carrie, a lovely winning poem... congrats in Andrea's "Picture Perfect" contest... sweet...LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 3:14 PM
HI, Carrie, loved seeing this in my contest!! you painted the picture beautifully!! Congrats for your win.
Arowolo Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 3:00 PM
Lovely piece..Great write,Carrie..Congratulations on your win...
Lamoureux Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 12:17 PM
Please say there is another horse, I would love to ride along as well. Congrats, loved it.
Neels Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 5:28 AM
Carrie, this is an awesome piece ;) Congratulations on your win with this beauty, enjoyed every line :)
Nair Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 10:59 PM
Carrie, Congrats on the top win, this is such a nice one like your poems always are, I love your visits , thnx so much, hugs:) Jag
Merryman Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 7:54 PM
Carrie, congrats on your 1st place win with this wonderfully descriptive poem! Love, Kim
Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 9:47 AM
Amazing poem Carrie you got my heart here with the outback and horses. big congrats for winning Shadow x adding to favs
George   Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 5:29 AM
Hi Carrie, You brought that picture to life! How beautiful!! Many congrats on your so well deserved Number one win. Lainie
Guzzi Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 3:43 PM
mmm [gunmetal skies!]yummie[crackled veneer] ut oh you got robbed!!!! just delightful! Congrad's Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 8:45 PM
congrats Carrie on a glorious write and win from photo presented about this wonderful country luv..
Brown Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 1:09 PM
Congratualtions on your win in Tracie's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 9:22 AM
I love how you finished it .Beautiful poem.Congrats on your win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations a lovely piece, xx
Edwards Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 6:12 AM
A mazing poem Carrie..congrats on your 10th place win in my contest xxx Hugs
Fraser Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 4:37 PM
To write and single out the third horse is exceptional. Not many would have seen this angle. They would have been lured into the bush, where their words would determine their write. <*> If this was my contest, even without reading the others - no disrespect "how many" your concept Carrie, is already a winner, oh my! :) xx
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Early morning reading to get the mind buzzing. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Carrie. Have a fabulous weekend and I hope to see more of your poetry when I get back to the Soup Monday. Usually pretty busy on the weekends with family so don't get to read much. Love, Carol
Amadore Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 3:33 PM
A poem with just the right flavor...you convey the wistful longing to make real your daydream while vividly sketching the scene. Good work.
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