Picture Perfect

I fondle the brush strokes of a brown afternoon, inviting me along, to the land of down under. I will take a small journey, under gunmetal skies, through country as rough as the crackled veneer. On the trail of the outback, while the afternoon sighs, there are three saddled horses, two men, and their packs. Roustabouts are riding, with the sun at their backs. A pall of white petals drift over their heads, from a rift in the cottonwoods, that frame the river’s bed. I will drink in illusion, as the horses refresh, as they prance through deep waters, on that calm, summer's day. I am thirsty, and eager, to reach out and touch, and to ride in the outback, beneath silver skies, on the one extra horse, that lingers nearby...
________________________________________________________________ Based on the Painting "A Lil' Bit of Aus..." _________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/25/2013 4:47:00 AM
carrie, this is, as ever, a wonderful piece of writing; some lovely, unexpected wording - "crackled veneer", "a pall of white petals" etc. - really deserving of a much higher placement imo, I would've given it a 1st or 2nd, for sure! :)
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Date: 8/25/2013 3:22:00 AM
Well Carrie, I don't know what to say anymore...I've run out of adjectives...Soup Mail...
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Date: 8/24/2013 6:28:00 PM
What can I add? You are perfect and I adore and admire your talent
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Date: 8/22/2013 9:07:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, CARRIE!! Picture awesome Perfect. LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/22/2013 8:04:00 PM
Carrie, a lovely winning poem... congrats in Andrea's "Picture Perfect" contest... sweet...LINDA
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Date: 8/22/2013 3:14:00 PM
HI, Carrie, loved seeing this in my contest!! you painted the picture beautifully!! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/22/2013 3:00:00 PM
Lovely piece..Great write,Carrie..Congratulations on your win...
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Date: 8/22/2013 12:17:00 PM
Please say there is another horse, I would love to ride along as well. Congrats, loved it.
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Date: 6/19/2013 5:28:00 AM
Carrie, this is an awesome piece ;) Congratulations on your win with this beauty, enjoyed every line :)
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Date: 6/17/2013 10:59:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on the top win, this is such a nice one like your poems always are, I love your visits , thnx so much, hugs:) Jag
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Date: 6/17/2013 7:54:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your 1st place win with this wonderfully descriptive poem! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/17/2013 9:47:00 AM
Amazing poem Carrie you got my heart here with the outback and horses. big congrats for winning Shadow x adding to favs
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Date: 6/17/2013 5:29:00 AM
Hi Carrie, You brought that picture to life! How beautiful!! Many congrats on your so well deserved Number one win. Lainie
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Date: 3/8/2012 3:43:00 PM
mmm [gunmetal skies!]yummie[crackled veneer] ut oh you got robbed!!!! just delightful! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:45:00 PM
congrats Carrie on a glorious write and win from photo presented about this wonderful country luv..
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Date: 3/5/2012 1:09:00 PM
Congratualtions on your win in Tracie's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/5/2012 9:22:00 AM
I love how you finished it .Beautiful poem.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/5/2012 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations a lovely piece, xx
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Date: 3/5/2012 6:12:00 AM
A mazing poem Carrie..congrats on your 10th place win in my contest xxx Hugs
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:37:00 PM
To write and single out the third horse is exceptional. Not many would have seen this angle. They would have been lured into the bush, where their words would determine their write. <*> If this was my contest, even without reading the others - no disrespect "how many" your concept Carrie, is already a winner, oh my! :) xx
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Date: 2/24/2012 6:02:00 AM
Early morning reading to get the mind buzzing. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Carrie. Have a fabulous weekend and I hope to see more of your poetry when I get back to the Soup Monday. Usually pretty busy on the weekends with family so don't get to read much. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 3:33:00 PM
A poem with just the right flavor...you convey the wistful longing to make real your daydream while vividly sketching the scene. Good work.
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