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Picture of a Windy Morning

How the wind plays across the water in changing patterns, its skittish mood drawn in ripples and rivulets of sparkle under a morning sun. The small boats fidgety at their moorings as if roused by longings of freedom, cormorants riding the unrest on bobbing prows with outstretched wings drying in the wind. See how the day is slowly being assembled, putting itself together with ferry boats and dogs pulling on leads, wired joggers, noisy children in school uniforms crowding at bus stops, workers putting up signs. How it all seems to be following some hidden script. And here I am, again, walking the morning looking for what I lost in the long hours of a sleepless night when it doesn't have a name, being ushered by the wind towards a somewhere or nowhere at all, helped along my shuffling way by a strange sense of unhurried trust that all will be OK.

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Date: 11/17/2023 8:36:00 AM
This is beautiful, as always Paul. I share that feeling sometimes as if I'm on a different plane, watching something moving at the wrong speed as everyone is so busy like an ant colony and I'm ghost of Christmas something or other watching without being seen or heard. That sense that someone has a clue what it's all about but never reveals themselves. We are all puppets and sometimes I notice with an out of body feeling... Ahh I let myself think too long and have lost my grip haha - I enjoyed!
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/17/2023 6:40:00 PM
Sounds almost like an out of body experience DD,. Good to hear that the poem was greeted with kindness, as always appreciate your generosity and for sharing your thoughtscapes...valued. Paul
Date: 11/16/2023 5:51:00 AM
Great poem to start my day, Paul. The wind is blowing here today as it does most Autumn days. Almost like a foreboding of what's to come. I enjoyed seeing it through you eyes on your side of the planet. Shuffling is a good word to describe my gait:) Have a great day my friend
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/17/2023 6:31:00 PM
Thanks Daniel. Late Spring here of course...can get a bit windblown on the coast. Good to hear that the poem greeted your morning...appreciate your support and kind words.
Date: 11/16/2023 4:29:00 AM
truly magnificent, Paul. I envisioned you walking and watching the wind unfold the day. I do the same thing every morning. You described what I haven't been able to put into words: "strange sense of unhurried trust that all will be okay." So well said and beautifully constructed. Am faving this one, Paul. Have a splendid day. Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/17/2023 6:26:00 PM
Sometimes that sense of trust is the only thing you can hold onto....gets you through. Indeed appreciate your kind and positive comments Sara, so pleased that the poem found a place to linger for awhile, valued. Paul

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