Pickup Line For Contest

Never had the courage to say, 
"Hi Beautiful, will you go to bed with me?"
My face would probably get slapped
But as they say in baseball
many strikeouts for a Home Run.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 6, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Thomas :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*
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May 6, 2015 at 9:32 AM
Thomas, LOL, glad you never gave up. Makes me wonder about the strikes. Now I know why some men never give up. Thank you for the info.. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~
Roberts Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 2:04 AM
Well done....congrats ....Seren
Konos Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 9:08 PM
Thank you for being in my contest. This is seriously KQQL
Lamoureux Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 8:01 PM
Ha ha, a guy can dream! Congrats.
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:10 PM
you are a rascal. Would that be Maggie May? Congrats, Thomas!
Roper Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Thomas:-) Hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 1:12 AM
lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
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May 4, 2015 at 7:01 PM
LOL very cute Thomas! good luck on the contest
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May 4, 2015 at 5:58 PM
Love the pick up line, a 7 and good luck in the contest
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