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Pickup Fails

Oh hey girl, I have to inquire Do you like to sit on live wire? You’re making me choke From all of that smoke ‘Cause damn girl, that booty’s on fire!

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Date: 1/29/2024 4:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win!

Date: 1/29/2024 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations, that was a fun one to read.

Date: 1/29/2024 7:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K

Date: 1/29/2024 4:40:00 AM

This had me in stitches. Congratulations on the trophy win in my contest, Jessica.

Suzette Richards
Date: 1/30/2024 3:24:00 AM

You are welcome, Jessica :)

Jessica Wheeler
Date: 1/29/2024 6:30:00 AM

Suzette, I am honored! Thank you so much for hosting such a fun contest! :) xo

Date: 1/29/2024 3:51:00 AM

Jessica, a great limerick, very funny, congratulations on your trophy win.

Jessica Wheeler
Date: 1/29/2024 6:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tania!:)

Date: 1/28/2024 3:11:00 PM

LOL Jessica. I'm still laughing after reading it twice! :)

Jessica Wheeler
Date: 1/29/2024 6:31:00 AM

lol thank you so much, Linda!

Date: 1/16/2024 8:03:00 PM

LOL! Good one!

Jessica Wheeler
Date: 1/29/2024 6:31:00 AM

Haha thank you, Kim!