Faleshia Murphy Poet Limerick

Pickles and Tickles

I'm going to free that pickle from the jar
Free for a minute but it won't get very far
In my mouth as the juices flow
Down the hatch here you go
Poor pickle was gone before I got to the car


Faleshia Murphy
FOR P.D. contest 
PICKLES AND TICKLES

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 27, 2011 at 10:35 AM Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Faleshia. So glad to hear from you been a long time my friend. Linda-Marie has been asking about you also please stop by and see her and let her know how you are doing. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit February 15, 2011 at 8:07 AM What a cute limerick! If you won in a contest with this entry, then congratulations!

Poet Destroyer A November 17, 2010 at 10:41 AM Faleshia, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2010 at 9:10 PM very cute, Faleshia. I enjoyed this one. LUv, Andrea

James Fraser November 15, 2010 at 1:48 PM Mouth watering Limerick Faleshia, congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown November 15, 2010 at 10:22 AM Congratulations on your win Faleshia in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol

John Freeman November 15, 2010 at 9:26 AM Cute humor Faleshia. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 14, 2010 at 8:01 AM Congrats Faleshia on your big win in P.D.'s contest with this wonderful Limerick luv... so cute to read.. enjoy your sweet success and victory this happy Sunday with lots of luv my friend.. hope all is well with u and u are happy...

Sara Kendrick November 14, 2010 at 6:27 AM Congratulations..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta November 14, 2010 at 4:43 AM Congratulations on this well deserv ed win, faleshia

Sara Kendrick November 2, 2010 at 2:38 PM Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Reginald Conyers October 24, 2010 at 6:31 PM so turned on right know.

Jayne Eggins October 19, 2010 at 8:27 PM Smiles Good luck in PD's comp ... loved your limerick with a twist ... and many thanks for your kind comment on my poem love Jayne

Sylvia Coulstock October 17, 2010 at 3:42 PM Hi Faleshia I don't like pickles but I liked this,it tickled my funny bone.Good luck in the contest. luv June(sylvia)

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2010 at 12:07 AM Good one, Faleshia. So true for the pickle lovers out there!! LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 16, 2010 at 8:36 PM Cute one Faleshia.. good luck in the contest... your title must be the name of the contest luv.. Pickles and Tickles.. its the same for all entries .. so don't get disqualified ..luv.. change now.. and good luck luv..

Poet Destroyer A October 16, 2010 at 5:04 PM love it Faleshia..lol... sorry had to read and comment it ahead of time...i was trying to skip it,,sorry could not, Enjoyed,, love the super smile on this one,..p.d.

Francine Roberts October 16, 2010 at 4:21 PM cute one Faleshia, good luck in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta October 16, 2010 at 3:27 PM Very nice entry to the contest, very humorous, who is more tricky?, faleshia

Carol Sunshine Brown October 16, 2010 at 3:24 PM Exceptional poetry to be reading this Saturday afternoon Faleshia. This surely tickled me dear friend. The best to you in the contest. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol

Phyllis Babcock October 16, 2010 at 1:51 PM This is a cute write. Made me smile. Good luck in the contest. God Bless Phyl