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Pickles and Tickles

I'm going to free that pickle from the jar
Free for a minute but it won't get very far
In my mouth as the juices flow
Down the hatch here you go
Poor pickle was gone before I got to the car


Faleshia Murphy
FOR P.D. contest 
PICKLES AND TICKLES

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/27/2011 10:35:00 AM

Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Faleshia. So glad to hear from you been a long time my friend. Linda-Marie has been asking about you also please stop by and see her and let her know how you are doing. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/15/2011 8:07:00 AM

What a cute limerick! If you won in a contest with this entry, then congratulations!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2010 10:41:00 AM

Faleshia, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2010 9:10:00 PM

very cute, Faleshia. I enjoyed this one. LUv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 11/15/2010 1:48:00 PM

Mouth watering Limerick Faleshia, congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2010 10:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Faleshia in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 11/15/2010 9:26:00 AM

Cute humor Faleshia. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/14/2010 8:01:00 AM

Congrats Faleshia on your big win in P.D.'s contest with this wonderful Limerick luv... so cute to read.. enjoy your sweet success and victory this happy Sunday with lots of luv my friend.. hope all is well with u and u are happy...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2010 6:27:00 AM

Congratulations..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/14/2010 4:43:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserv ed win, faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/2/2010 2:38:00 PM

Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Reginald Conyers

Date: 10/24/2010 6:31:00 PM

so turned on right know.

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/19/2010 8:27:00 PM

Smiles Good luck in PD's comp ... loved your limerick with a twist ... and many thanks for your kind comment on my poem love Jayne

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 10/17/2010 3:42:00 PM

Hi Faleshia I don't like pickles but I liked this,it tickled my funny bone.Good luck in the contest. luv June(sylvia)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2010 12:07:00 AM

Good one, Faleshia. So true for the pickle lovers out there!! LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/16/2010 8:36:00 PM

Cute one Faleshia.. good luck in the contest... your title must be the name of the contest luv.. Pickles and Tickles.. its the same for all entries .. so don't get disqualified ..luv.. change now.. and good luck luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/16/2010 5:04:00 PM

love it Faleshia..lol... sorry had to read and comment it ahead of time...i was trying to skip it,,sorry could not, Enjoyed,, love the super smile on this one,..p.d.

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/16/2010 4:21:00 PM

cute one Faleshia, good luck in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/16/2010 3:27:00 PM

Very nice entry to the contest, very humorous, who is more tricky?, faleshia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/16/2010 3:24:00 PM

Exceptional poetry to be reading this Saturday afternoon Faleshia. This surely tickled me dear friend. The best to you in the contest. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol