Pickle-Itis

Mr Moody yearned for a big pickle His taste buds he needed to tickle He ate twenty four Then fell on the floor Digestion can be oh so fickle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 17, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Barbara, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.
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November 15, 2010 at 9:15 PM
hahaha, LOVE it, Barbara. Congratulations on the winner circle. Luv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 2:14 PM
Ouchy, I can picture him doubled up, nice one Barbara. Many congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations on your win Barbara in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
Mannan Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 9:05 PM
Hahaha. Loved this one. Many congratulations for this win.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Congrats BG on your winning poem in P.D.'s pickle contest with this wonderful Limerick u penned.. luv your last line too..on this one.. enjoy your sweet victory this happy Sunday with luv..
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November 14, 2010 at 6:33 AM
Congratulations..Sara
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October 23, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Good luck in the contest with this one...I could imagine what that would do to someone..LOL...Bloated belly and all....Thanks for letting me know that I won in your contest..I forget to check these out...I know that judging has to be so difficult with all the great writes that are posted on here..Thanks again..Sara
Richards Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 3:42 PM
How cute is this!!.....oh dear.....digestion may not handle 24 pickles...for sure!! :)
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October 18, 2010 at 6:15 PM
oh no the pickle crawl, or is it pickle poison?
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