Pickle On the Road

When walking along on the road,
An object appeared, so I slowed.
It was probably tossed
From a car that had crossed;
The surprise on my face must have showed.

‘Twas a pickle, a deli-type spear,
Maybe packed with a sandwich? Unclear.
Crisp and green, its appeal
Would add much to a meal 
Of a passing black bear or a deer.

Still, the person who flung it outside 
Didn’t mean for a snack to provide.
He was likely a smug
Type of littering bug,
Maybe pickled himself, for the ride.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Slaughter Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 10:38 AM
Yes, I'm with Caren, Ilene. I'd relieve myself of other parts of a sandwich, but never the pickle.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 10:42 PM
I would never throw away any pickle - I love them all - I wonder why this pickle had not been "snapped up"?
Wolf Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 6:55 PM
Ha, ha! ... He threw it on the road // before long it foretold // a game called 'pickle-ball,' pure gold!
M  Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 4:11 AM
Haha….a pickle thats funny! Must say l hate littering….enjoyed this Ilene! Debx
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 2:14 AM
- A fun read, Ilene :) - Well done :) - hugs
Baker Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 5:13 PM
Nice Limerick, Ilene. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing my friend. Bill
Flood Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 3:10 PM
I do like a good Limerick, Ilene, and this is three for the price of one. I have to say I’m not a lover of what we Brits call ‘Gherkins’ but lobbing them from a moving car seems extreme. Enjoyed this yarn, which, knowing you, is quite likely true. Terry
Bell Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 8:52 AM
How does nobody throw bags of cash out their cars, so you can return it, no.
Cunningham Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 12:25 AM
Lol, it's amazing what you come across on the roads or pavements. Tom
Situation Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 6:39 PM
Keep up the real experiences.
Merryman Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 6:21 PM
Three well-written limericks with a humorous twist at the end. Ilene, I love how you can take an otherwise hum drum life moment and turn it into a poetic work of art! Blessings, Kim M
Allison Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 2:57 PM
love the humour at the end - got to say I love dill pickles especially with pastrami!!! hugs jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 2:01 PM
I love your humour. Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem.
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