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Pickle On the Road

When walking along on the road, An object appeared, so I slowed. It was probably tossed From a car that had crossed; The surprise on my face must have showed. ‘Twas a pickle, a deli-type spear, Maybe packed with a sandwich? Unclear. Crisp and green, its appeal Would add much to a meal Of a passing black bear or a deer. Still, the person who flung it outside Didn’t mean for a snack to provide. He was likely a smug Type of littering bug, Maybe pickled himself, for the ride.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/23/2023 10:38:00 AM
Yes, I'm with Caren, Ilene. I'd relieve myself of other parts of a sandwich, but never the pickle.
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Date: 8/16/2023 10:42:00 PM
I would never throw away any pickle - I love them all - I wonder why this pickle had not been "snapped up"?
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Date: 8/16/2023 6:55:00 PM
Ha, ha! ... He threw it on the road // before long it foretold // a game called 'pickle-ball,' pure gold!
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Date: 8/16/2023 4:11:00 AM
Haha….a pickle thats funny! Must say l hate littering….enjoyed this Ilene! Debx
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Date: 8/16/2023 2:14:00 AM
- A fun read, Ilene :) - Well done :) - hugs
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Date: 8/15/2023 5:13:00 PM
Nice Limerick, Ilene. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing my friend. Bill
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Date: 8/15/2023 3:10:00 PM
I do like a good Limerick, Ilene, and this is three for the price of one. I have to say I’m not a lover of what we Brits call ‘Gherkins’ but lobbing them from a moving car seems extreme. Enjoyed this yarn, which, knowing you, is quite likely true. Terry
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Date: 8/15/2023 8:52:00 AM
How does nobody throw bags of cash out their cars, so you can return it, no.
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Date: 8/15/2023 12:25:00 AM
Lol, it's amazing what you come across on the roads or pavements. Tom
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Date: 8/14/2023 6:39:00 PM
Keep up the real experiences.
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Date: 8/14/2023 6:21:00 PM
Three well-written limericks with a humorous twist at the end. Ilene, I love how you can take an otherwise hum drum life moment and turn it into a poetic work of art! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/14/2023 2:57:00 PM
love the humour at the end - got to say I love dill pickles especially with pastrami!!! hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/14/2023 2:01:00 PM
I love your humour. Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem.
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