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Pic Motifs Visual 2

My boyfriend is smoking hot. I kid you not. Under that hood I understood lay my destiny. In the dark I felt the spark as we passed. Love to last. 18/11/2017 30 words, 137 characters.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/21/2017 9:48:00 PM

Smoking hot...I love it Jean! Congratulations on your win! : )

Jean Murray
Date: 11/22/2017 3:14:00 AM

Somebody throw some water on that chap!!

Constance La France

Date: 11/21/2017 4:58:00 PM

Jean, I like your take on the visual and congratulations on your win in the contest !

Jean Murray
Date: 11/21/2017 5:18:00 PM

Thank you Constance.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2017 12:06:00 AM

How fun that you went off the "smoking hot" of the picture. Great idea to run with , Jean. Big congrats in the contest

Jean Murray
Date: 11/21/2017 4:29:00 AM

Good morning Andrea and thank you. I can't help myself. I always run with the first thing that comes into my mind.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2017 3:49:00 PM

ohh, jean...this playful though deep poem enticed me...sweet congrats and thanks for your splendid entry!

Jean Murray
Date: 11/20/2017 3:51:00 PM

Thank you for the placement Nette.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/20/2017 3:16:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win :)

Jean Murray
Date: 11/20/2017 3:21:00 PM

You're so nice Eve. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2017 12:26:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 11/20/2017 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. I seem to manage by the skin of my teeth. I always know to start at the bottom of the winning list. I still consider myself to be fortunate to be on the list in the first place of course. God loves a trier they say.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/20/2017 9:22:00 AM

I can't see the picture, but I get the picture! Then again, it could have been Danica Patrick talking about her latest race car... jus say'n;-) Hugs 'n spark plugs! ~ john

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/20/2017 11:25:00 AM

:-)

Jean Murray
Date: 11/20/2017 9:40:00 AM

Is there a difference?