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She stands under a gas lit lantern- in the f a l l i n g rain . . . she is so W E A R Y - a car stops and silently she gets in- she will give her body to survive- ___________________________ November 16, 2017 Poetry/Verse/Pic Motif Copyright Protected, ID 17- 9617-98-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Pic Motifs sponsor, Nette Onclaud Visual #1 Word Count - 30 Second Place

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Date: 11/22/2017 5:51:00 PM
How very creative this is, Constance, both in content and presentation. I can feel her sad weary mood of resignation. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/21/2017 8:09:00 PM
This was a stunner Constance! Congratulations on your most deserving second placement! : )
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:57:00 PM
Broken Wings, I love the last stanza, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:56:00 PM
wow, you really thought outside the box with this idea, Constance. I LOVE this one. Congrats on your very well deserved win.
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Date: 11/20/2017 9:48:00 PM
As usual, poignantly out of the box. Congrats on your win with this brilliant work.
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Date: 11/20/2017 4:31:00 PM
A creative take on the visual..Congrats on your win BW
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Date: 11/20/2017 2:57:00 PM
thank you for this spellbinding piece, constance... love the poetic mood and language..happy congrats!
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Date: 11/20/2017 12:36:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, B.W. :)
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Date: 11/17/2017 6:56:00 AM
- A lovely and touching writing, B.W. :) - Best wishes in the contest and for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/17/2017 4:09:00 AM
Beautifully rendered write my friend, I loved the intriguing way you have written a peaceful poem here this morning! What a fabulous poem, such a tender piece, glorious in all aspects, Nette will like this write I just know it! Great Work!!
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