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Glassy lamp  flickers
to expose her quiet vulnerability,
while fingers thumb pages
of his delayed letters---

Hiding in tenebrous light
she quavers relentlessly,
knowing it’s time for goodbye 
come morning.



Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/21/2017 4:45:00 PM
Rora, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in the contest !
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:54:00 PM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:53:00 PM
Rora, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/20/2017 9:45:00 PM
I was touched by this entry the most. Well deserved winning poem so brilliantly written. Congratulations!!
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Date: 11/20/2017 4:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win Rora
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Date: 11/20/2017 2:38:00 PM
big congrats on your top slot as i thank you for joining, rora...your kind of light brings out the melancholia of darkness instead; what an interplay of words...
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Date: 11/20/2017 1:25:00 PM
Shining lexicon in this wonderful entry for a very worthy First placement. Congratulations! : )
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Date: 11/20/2017 12:41:00 PM
- A beautiful poem Rora, congratulations on your win :) - hugs // S.S. :)
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Date: 11/15/2017 11:29:00 AM
Well penned Rora..... winning wishes
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