Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Pleiades

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15.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May

4th place in the contest

- Piano -

                                      Patience is the first rule
                                      Passionate harmonies
                                      Playfully on the keys,
                                      painted in black and white
                                      Prelude in E minor
                                      Piano ... played all night
                                      Price; be famous and rich

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Ink Empress September 21, 2023 at 7:46 AM Beautiful pleiades, your chosen words for P is unique and flows beautifully: very well crafted . I loved this. Congratulations

Terry Flood September 20, 2023 at 4:38 PM Congrats on your win, Anne-Lise. Nicely penned.

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 20, 2023 at 11:48 AM Love the poem and the picture too, Anne-Lise. Warmest congratulations on your win. :) hugs

Janice Canerdy September 20, 2023 at 8:03 AM Very enjoyable poem, Anne-Lise. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Laura Leiser September 20, 2023 at 7:15 AM Enjoyed this Pleiades poem on the piano, Anee-Lise! Congrats on your win. :)

Sara Kendrick September 20, 2023 at 6:23 AM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Yes, play and be famous like Floyd Cramer or Liberace. However, someone who plays an instrument it can be enjoyed by home and family, church, or community. Sara

Sotto Poet September 20, 2023 at 6:22 AM Anne-Lise Congratulations on your win with this great Pleiades

Joseph May September 20, 2023 at 5:34 AM Nicely penned Anne, Congrats on your win

I Am Anaya September 19, 2023 at 8:44 PM First steps of learning the piano, expressed, in limited syllables and lines. Great entry, Anne-Lise! Hope to see it on top of the list. B0l Anne-Lise Andresen September 20, 2023 at 3:47 AM - Thank you very much, Anaya :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel September 19, 2023 at 1:43 AM I like how you did this one, especially that ending line, perfect, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen September 19, 2023 at 2:36 AM - Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs

Terry Flood September 16, 2023 at 3:06 PM I’d give my write arm to be able to play piano… oh… hang about! A smashing Pleiades, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen September 19, 2023 at 2:36 AM of course :))) Terry Flood September 18, 2023 at 2:26 AM Gaaarrhhhh! WRITE arm… of course I meant RIGHT arm. Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2023 at 2:19 AM - Many thanks, Terry :) - hugs

Eve Roper September 16, 2023 at 1:47 PM Great imagery For piano. I also picked the piano. And I love the picture with the poem. Good luck in the contest I’m not good with the form many blessings to my dear. Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2023 at 2:18 AM - Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs

Sotto Poet September 16, 2023 at 7:17 AM Wow, your mastery of the piano is truly breathtaking! Hope your delicate touch and impeccable technique will garner you with a well-deserved win. Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2023 at 1:36 PM - Many thanks, Las :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar September 16, 2023 at 1:35 AM Creativity is your middle name. A truly gracious Pleiades. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2023 at 1:35 PM - Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Quoth Theraven September 15, 2023 at 10:24 PM Anne-Lise, What a fine piece played, and with such a high price paid. -Richard Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2023 at 1:35 PM - Practice makes perfect... and paid :) - Thanks for your comment, Richard :) - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino September 15, 2023 at 8:24 PM Well, my wife, a retired music teacher, still have the piano and she plays often and lovely. We are a musical family. Lovely poem! Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2023 at 1:33 PM - I don't know a note... completely unmusical, me and my family... wish I could, Joe :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs

Akkina Downing September 15, 2023 at 7:13 PM Fantabulous!!! You guys are so good with this form. Best of luck in the contest, Anne-Lise :) hugs ~ Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2023 at 1:30 PM - A fun way to write... I like short poems, Akkina :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds September 15, 2023 at 3:01 PM A fantastic creative Pleiades Anne-Lise, I admire the skill of anyone who can play the piano, or any other musical instrument come to that :) Hugs, Belle Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2023 at 1:28 PM - I admire them too, Belle - Many thanks :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes September 15, 2023 at 1:59 PM Aww that's not fair !!! Folk told me mine would win, and then you go and put one up that is much better!! :( ... But if anyone had to create one better than mine, I am glad it was you sweet friend. I hate to admit it, but I really love your Pleiades ! Your Image is great too. You did great Sunshine. Well done. Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2023 at 1:27 PM - I liked your suggestion... Piano was a bit tricky... thanks, S.V. :) - hugs

Jan Allison September 15, 2023 at 1:56 PM I love your interpretation of the Piano theme, we chose the same prompt but our poems are so different, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2023 at 1:25 PM - Many pianos in this contest, Jan ... thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit September 15, 2023 at 1:41 PM Harmonious words emanating rhythms of Piano. Beautiful tenor to your poem, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2023 at 1:23 PM - Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs

Silent One September 15, 2023 at 1:34 PM You did this so creatively... like your arrangement of words .. Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2023 at 1:23 PM - Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs