Physician, Heal Thyself

Could a soul find room
at the core of an atom?
So Eve changed the spelling
thinking dim of such wit –
thought an apple a day
would keep both of them
fit....
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Wolf Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 8:16 PM
Interesting write here, Joe. Funny how 'apples,' which helped bring death into the world, are the 'symbol of health' now. ~ Dr. Fruitcake
DiMino Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Everything has a plus and a negative, thanks to the Devil. TV. can be a blessing or a curse -- it is a curse. Thank you my friend for such a wise observation. Blessings!
Romios Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 11:03 PM
Prince de Mino... A very clever poem.i liked your style and wit. Pangie xx
DiMino Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 4:07 PM
Thank you, Pangie; it is fun to write these short, brain teasers. Have a great day!
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:13 PM
great humor!! Liked the way you mixed up the metaphor at the end.
DiMino Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 3:59 PM
Thank you, Andrea; this was a lot of fun to write. Have a great day!!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 3:41 PM
Great!
DiMino Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 4:21 PM
Thank you, Kim; made my day! Blessings!
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