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Social climbers often end up falling off their pinnacle. The way I see it, I am who and what I am. If you can't accept that ----- Go away.

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People often judge each other according to their speech.
Your accent or your dialect it seems sometimes can breach,
The barriers of some protocol causing them to question,
The digits found in your I.Q. or how much education,

Could be lacking in your life or what could be your station.
Should they include you in their clique perhaps repeat Pygmalion?
Of course! That's it! Oh let's begin!
Oh this will be such fun! We'll take her in, teach her to blend,

Remake her head to toe! Refine her speech and then we'll teach,
Her when to speak and how, through us she'll reach a station close to ours.
But when at last the work is done and they see their creation,
And it's time for your debut, a kind of graduation,

You find that all is all in vain, you've done less good than harm;
For underneath you are still you, your speech is half your charm.
Why not leave well enough alone, to thine own self be true;
For nowhere else in all the world is there another YOU.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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January 7, 2022 at 11:33 AM
Wow Judy, this poem fits a person I , have known to a T! someone who comes from somewhere, who had nothing but has made money, thinks that they are famous, clever and oh so funny, this person lives to take selfies on the phone, clicks it when you're unaware and alone, and shares it on media, though this person is no encyclpedia, how do they not smother Their significant other, although holds no material control, maps out significant others daily life, their aim and only goal! Hugs, Jenn.
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January 10, 2022 at 10:48 PM
Thanks so much Jennifer. My husband's sister's husband is like that too. When they were engaged his family ran a background check on her to see if she was "good enough" for him. People! Go Figure! God Bless, JB
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January 6, 2022 at 5:16 PM
Hello Judy ... another fine take on the values of life and how to make it better - thanks again Judy - Lindsay
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January 10, 2022 at 10:40 PM
Thank you so much Lindsay. God Bless, JB
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January 4, 2022 at 6:38 PM
I'm toining ovah a new leaf. No mo'ah trying to be noimal fo' me!! ~ Brooklyn Dodger
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January 5, 2022 at 8:07 AM
lol;) Thank you so much Gershon. Go Bless, JB
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January 3, 2022 at 9:21 PM
You’ve said well what happened to her. Once we take someone in they will change…we don’t own them but perhaps we owe them a great deal even if we are paid.
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January 4, 2022 at 6:33 AM
Thank you so much Kim. God Bless, JB
Brown Avatar
January 3, 2022 at 4:48 PM
Judy, you did a fantastic job. Well written... Debra,
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January 4, 2022 at 6:20 AM
Thank you so much Debra. God Bless, JB
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January 3, 2022 at 12:15 PM
A fine piece well penned Judy , good imagery and nice expression too. Trust all is well in the new year, blessings always,Gordon
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January 3, 2022 at 2:30 PM
Thank you so much Gordon. God Bless, JB
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January 3, 2022 at 6:48 AM
Judy, you have penned a fantastic poem. Speaking more fluently does not automatically translate into being a better person. They must, however, put in the effort to do so—a fantastic piece of writing. Warm Hugs, I hope you had a wonderful time celebrating the new year and that you are poised to make a fresh start in the new year.
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January 3, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Looking forward to better times. God Bless and thanks so much my friend. JB
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January 3, 2022 at 6:36 AM
The rain in Spain falls mainly on the plain. How oft I saw that play. And it is true that improvement in speech may not always change a person to be better. But they must try. Great Poem. Hugs.
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January 3, 2022 at 11:03 AM
Thank you so much Victor. I live in Canada but have a Southern accent since I was born and raised in Florida. When my girls were growing up kids used to tell them their mom talked like a cow girl. Some people used to think I WAS slow because I talked slow. WRONG. I've also been told my accent was charming. Just depends on people. God Bless, JB
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