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Phoenix Rising

Today, I felt as if I stepped off a cliff. Am I just a waif? For so long I have been in bondage. And I have seen the carnage. the pain and agony, and people looking down at me from the balcony. Today in my silence I felt a surge of defiance. Just as the phoenix rising I will no more be compromising Shackles and chains are broken No more soft-spoken Let the weak become strong For I do belong I am one of the chosen I am like Lozen. © Deborah Seale Schnadelbach 5/17/2022

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Date: 6/9/2023 5:35:00 AM
What an inspiring poem! I am tempted to add as conclusion/lesson from the poem: my past is over. Defeat and failure are things of the past!
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Date: 6/7/2023 3:28:00 PM
Amazing message, lovely writing!
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Date: 6/7/2023 1:52:00 PM
A wonderful poem. Keep The Faith.
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Date: 6/7/2023 1:40:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading this poem, it is not obtuse, don't need a dictionary to read it ( dictionary just kill poetry).. Keep up the good work.. :) john
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Date: 5/17/2022 7:35:00 PM
Breaking shackles and chains! Wonderful, empowering poem.
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Deborah Seale
Date: 5/18/2022 9:51:00 AM
Thank you

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