Phoenix Rising

Today, I felt as if I stepped off a cliff.
Am I just a waif?
For so long I have been in bondage.
And I have seen the carnage.
the pain and agony,
and people looking down at me from the balcony.
Today in my silence
I felt a surge of defiance.
Just as the phoenix rising
I will no more be compromising
Shackles and chains are broken
No more soft-spoken
Let the weak become strong
For I do belong
I am one of the chosen
I am like Lozen.

© Deborah Seale Schnadelbach 5/17/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Eseke Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 5:35 AM
What an inspiring poem! I am tempted to add as conclusion/lesson from the poem: my past is over. Defeat and failure are things of the past!
Perna Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Amazing message, lovely writing!
Robertson Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 1:52 PM
A wonderful poem. Keep The Faith.
Buss Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Really enjoyed reading this poem, it is not obtuse, don't need a dictionary to read it ( dictionary just kill poetry).. Keep up the good work.. :) john
Staton Avatar
May 17, 2022 at 7:35 PM
Breaking shackles and chains! Wonderful, empowering poem.
Seale Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 9:51 AM
Thank you
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