Phobia

The sound of heavy breathing
I pressed my right eye against the peephole
Nobody was there
A cold feeling ran deep through my sole
As I pressed my eye against the hole

Who’s their I said, in a horrified way
Nobody answered
Chocked up twice I said, go away go away

My body pressed tightly against the door
Desperate to see someone, but there was no-one
I scurried to the floor,
I peeked through the crack at the bottom of the door
Nobody was there

Thump thump footsteps sounded through my ears
I see no one, but behind my door was someone

Slowly, up I slithered with my back against the door
Unpolished nails added scratches to the door like a wild boar
Who are you, I cried, what do you want?
The breathing stopped, stomp stomp stomp

The sound of footsteps fading away
My skin crawled with fear
Curled in a corner on my face a icey tear
This phobia they say dates more than a year

I chose not to see
I shouted, leave me alone, leave me be
In this corner safe and curled
Behind my door is an unknown world
































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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 6/20/2019 12:40:00 PM
Been there and done that, Nice!
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Victoria Addino
Date: 6/20/2019 6:01:00 PM
LoL
Date: 3/11/2019 9:00:00 PM
People often confound feelings of apprehension with true phobias--there is no comparison. A psycho-neurotic illness is pure hell. Excellent write!
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Victoria Addino
Date: 6/20/2019 6:02:00 PM
Thank You very much!
Date: 1/29/2019 6:44:00 AM
Your title, caught my eye, having one the same...so glad it did though, this is a wonderful poem, Love the way you take one there...Harry
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Victoria Addino
Date: 1/29/2019 8:24:00 AM
From one Souper to another Thank You Very Much!
Date: 1/25/2019 12:45:00 PM
Fear does many things to people and we all have it interesting Victoria how you describe it in such a way that you can actually feel the fear though your words, great job my friend
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Victoria Addino
Date: 1/25/2019 3:03:00 PM
Thanks You,
Date: 1/23/2019 12:47:00 PM
Your ending is interesting, as it is always an unknown world beyond our door. Which is why I believe some people develop agoraphobia. It makes sense when you internalize it. Great poem Victoria.
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Victoria Addino
Date: 1/25/2019 3:04:00 PM
Thank You!
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