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Philandering Nature

A handsome butterfly hovers over my prized rose bushes. How brightly he flutters in the early light of day. The blossom on which he settles is the first virginal bloom of May. She is newly opened and most fragrant. As if blushing, she receives her suitor - a black butterfly with wings whose tips blend divinely with the hue of her velvet crimson beauty. Philandering nature when a butterfly steals the nectar of the rose, then just goes! Feb. 18, 2022 for the E Forms- Etheree - Poetry Contest Constance La France Syllables checked by Howmanysyllables.com Two etheree poems composing 110 syllables
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Seeker Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 9:27 PM
Oh wow! Only a bubbling pure romantic could have conjured this delightful composition!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 8:11 PM
So gorgeously penned - a winner in any contest "As if blushing, she receives her suitor - a black butterfly with wings whose tips" Lovely!
Kauffman Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 10:58 AM
"Philandering nature" indeed Andrea! This is so visual one can almost touch the butterfly and smell the fragrant rose. Wonderful poetic story of their brief romantic encounter - friendship for a season. Congratulations on your win! Blessings of roses and butterflies to you!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 1:00 PM
Wow Andrea, this is gorgeous! A perfect double Etheree. I bet Etheree would love it how her form is still being used were she still living. I love this Andrea. It is one of your best Etheree. Blessings xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 6:07 AM
A pretty picture, that is in poetry form! Congratulations, Andrea!
Y. Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 6:04 AM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to congratulate you on a well-deserved win. Have a nice day-Alexis
Poet Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 1:21 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win in the E Forms - Etheree contest, which you won with your lovely poem. You have earned it, laregely. Blessings and hugs.
La France Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 1:15 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your Second Place win in my E Forms - Etheree contest with your wonderful poem, I loved it ~Constance
Milgate Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 10:02 AM
lovely poem
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Hi Andrea, Very clever and intricately woven poetry - excellent. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
George Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 3:23 AM
Greatly enjoyed this romance between the rose and the butterfly ! Beautiful entry Andrea !
Legros Kelley Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 9:43 PM
Beautiful poem and photo. Butterflies are fickle, off to Daisies petals without a second glance back. Poor Rose....but here's another suitor...a bumbling giant, he'll bee back! <3
Horsman Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 5:29 PM
Then 'just goes' out of one's life, to be given a second chance with your creative mind. Beautiful poetry.
Brown Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 3:07 PM
Andrea, Well Penned, Good luck in the contest. Blessings ~ Debra
Bauer Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 1:56 PM
beautifully written, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
Y. Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 12:06 PM
WoW! Andrea, You have penned a good entry for the contest. A splendid nature verse. Best wishes in the contest.Have a good day and weekend-Alexis
Pandit Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 11:16 AM
Loved the photo and your poem, Andrea. A beautiful nature poem.
Leffanta Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Well said and done! Enjoyed! Whether butterfly, pigeon, or bunny, the females always appear to not notice the male humping away, or his subsequent departure, so sticking around does appear "unnatural" .... Aloha!
Calasibetta Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 10:19 AM
Your imagery in this Etheree is stunning! Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette
Jayasankar Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 10:09 AM
I totally admire your etherees Ria... So well crafted, apt for the image... Best wishes and hugs sweet friend... ~ Ani
Lawless Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 9:27 AM
The beauty of a one night stand in nature.
One Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 8:25 AM
I recall you were one of the first people on here to introduce the etheree then the andaree... you do these so well.. a great choice of words in your double etheree..
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 8:16 AM
A beautiful creation, Andrea! Love your Etheree on Nature. Hugs ~ Mala
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