Pheromonia

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Just one note: The Grrek origin of the word 'pheromone' derives from to 'convey' and 'hormone'.

From cinnamon bark fresh amber of ocean’s scent conveys musk’s resin Your coast perfuses my shore A gem wet and wild again 25th June 2017 written for contest: 'My Lover's Scent'

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2017 5:38:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in this one, Kai!

Darren White

Date: 7/15/2017 2:17:00 PM

that is a great tanka. well construed, and sensual :) good luck in the contest.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/17/2017 3:40:00 AM

Thanks Darren. Despite or because of my mostly long poems, it is very satisfying to write just one short verse for a change. Many wishes, Kai

Funom Makama

Date: 6/30/2017 8:55:00 AM

This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/17/2017 3:39:00 AM

Hi Funon, thank you so much for this compliment. Many wishes, Kai

John Hamilton

Date: 6/25/2017 6:02:00 PM

Beautiful write Kai!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/26/2017 2:45:00 AM

Thank you John. The perfume of life. Many wishes, Kai

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/25/2017 10:29:00 AM

This is lovely, Kai:)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/26/2017 2:46:00 AM

Thank you, I appreciate that. Take care, Kai