Phases

(Pen in hand, the work will follow -- 
writers’ nature deplores a hollow)

I’ve seen the moon
in many phases
a wonder to behold

with telescope
sought clearer to define
only so much revealed
by the human eye unaided

the blinkered heart 
having even less options -- 
senses themselves
Creation’s greatest mystery
what determines a life
the mortal language of feelings
very private till on vivid display

the craters of the moon so much like
love, even in light a pocks of shadows
at its elusive edges – strange what
we gaze upon in our abstract nights 

wondering if you occasionally recall me
if you yet have visions of me and notion
to wonder what may have been missed
in transience?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Godwin Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 5:12 AM
THE FIRST TWO LINES BLOW ME AWAY IN THE MOST DELIGHTFUL POETIC WAY, standalone poem in my opinion. I LOVE that couplet; I am that couplet. The rest of the poem is emotive, profound dessert after a 2-line entree. That's what happened to me, reading you. FAV, I must take those lines home with me.
DiMino Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 1:47 PM
Made my day! Thank you, CayCay. Have a blessed day!!
Wolf Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 9:26 PM
I like where this one went, Joe... Myself, it's cratering time as winter just won't quit...
DiMino Avatar
March 19, 2026 at 6:23 AM
As we age, the aches and pains, gets tougher to remain positive. I hear you.
George Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 10:36 PM
Celestial bodies, we can watch with the help of a telescope giving us a clearer view. But no gadgets are there to see clearly what is going on inside human mind. Love like the craters of the moon lies hidden . Great thoughts, Joe.
DiMino Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 6:29 AM
Thank you, Valsa; made my day. Lovely comment.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 11:55 PM
Great poem with emotion, imagery and deep thoughts.
DiMino Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 9:30 AM
Hi Victor; thank you, have a great day my friend!
Kendrick Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 1:56 PM
Yes, wondering what might have been, but we can never know about our non-taken path. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thank you for sharing. Way to go. Sara K
DiMino Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 9:32 AM
Never know...I like to think there are many of me and multiple realities -- certain God could handle it. Much about creation we do not understand. Probably truth wilder than any fiction.
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