Petunia In An Onion Patch

PETUNIA  IN  AN  ONION  PATCH


You’re always talking incessantly about  beauty
Or  whinging about life’s sadness and duty!
Just cant stand  you people called poets   
I’d sooner listen to my horse chomping oats
And your so-called rhyme schemes are a joke
As if the writer was just out of coke  -
A bit like Coleridge writing  Kubla Khan  -
Now there was a high-flying  man!
Your  poems oughta stay on the off-ramp wall
And never grace the written page at all

But now and again a real  versifier comes along
Not simply capable of penning words for a song;
She has wisdom and laughter in each line
And the taste of her rhyme is fine wine,
One moment raising my spirit in cheers
Then  swaying my soul, and  pouring out tears.
Her subtle profusion of  tenderness  coy
And her child-like wild soul’s unending joy,
Are my inspiration to go on and write
Another admiring  poetic effort  tonight.

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Written   for and entered in 
Vienna Bombardieri’s  Contest  Let me have it then kiss my petunia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 11:49 PM
I remember this one. So audacious and so wonderful. Big congrats on a well deserved win.
A   Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 8:18 AM
SIDNEY, congratulations in Vienna Bombardieri "Let me have it then kiss my petunia" INTERESTING contest... TAKE CARE :-) Love PD
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 5:31 AM
Congratulations on your win in Vienna's contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 9:56 PM
Congratulations on being selected a winner by Vie. You deserved recognition with this impressive entry.
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 12:31 PM
geeez, you had nerve to do this one. I just have no clue how to attempt it!! GREAT job. Soupmail
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 2:24 AM
Oh the knife goes deep then gently slides out spent xx Don't get a new toaster yet..........xx
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