Pets Should Be Beloved Not Beaten

In the misty drifts that blocked my view
a certain figure became clearer.
A man with a cane and a mean scowl too
walked up the sidewalk and drew nearer.

I heard loud shouts as I squinted my eyes
then I noticed him dragging a little pup.
It was on a chain and emitted sharp cries
with a look on it's face of giving up.

He kicked the pup and screamed at it too.
Called it names and kicked it again.
I felt my anger intense and true
rushing like lightening to my brain.

Not one more thought but for hurting this brute
harming a defenseless pet as he did.
I kicked him repeatedly with my boot.
Knocked him out with a garbage can lid!

I freed the pup and we made our escape
into the city streets and beyond.
Feeling like Superman minus his cape
we made our way to my grandma's pond.

Now a brand new home that puppy had
and I had vented my teenage fury.
So it seems some good came from the bad.
To that nasty old man I was judge and jury!



written by Deb Wilson
September 7th,2014 for Jared's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/7/2015 8:31:00 AM
Fair play to you, Deb- I've almost come close to causing serious grief to someone maltreating his Alsatian pup, but threatened him with sufficient menace (since I knew where he lived) as to change his attitiude. I still keep an eye out. Good verse- it should be on the website of any animal rescue/hospice charity x
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Date: 1/28/2015 12:23:00 AM
Great poem. Happy birthday! I didn't forget it :)
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Date: 1/28/2015 12:41:00 AM
aww thanks for remembering my birthday...how sweet!
Date: 11/18/2014 9:49:00 AM
animals are nature's fine creatures an must be treated with respect, deb... this is an empowering, defining piece.. been a while; hope you are well.. huggs
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Date: 9/29/2014 7:43:00 PM
Good for you Deb! I'd hate to tangle with YOU...You're outrage and anger were well justified to say the least! You are some kinda lady and this is a GREAT poem Favorite line: 'Feeling like Superman minus his cape' ...Good stuff and keep up the good work - Tim
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Date: 9/23/2014 10:42:00 AM
fine piece Deb, real fine write with such good rhyme and flow, God bless, Gordon
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Date: 9/22/2014 12:13:00 AM
a wonderful write dear..
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