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I once knew an old bloke called Peter Whose body could smell so much sweeter He stank of stale wee B O and coffee T’was worse when he sat by the heater! His daughter whose name is Anita Tried hard to help Peter smell sweeter He bathes twice a day She gave him some spray From Peter there is no foul fetor! 04~09~17

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2017 6:48:00 PM

Jan, I put a picture of my rose bushes if you want to go see it! took me forever to figure out how to do it.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/11/2017 6:53:00 PM

Oh I'll drop by again:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/10/2017 9:52:00 AM

How I love limericks, Jan, and this one is very witty. I hope Anita stays with Peter to make sure he continues to smell sweeter. Wonderful!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/10/2017 10:38:00 AM

I love writing limericks Carolyn I have written about 5 more today I simply can't stop lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 4/10/2017 8:35:00 AM

lol! you are so funny lady! great limerick- I always know where to go to get a good laugh :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/10/2017 10:38:00 AM

I simply can't stop I love this and the footle form:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/10/2017 1:50:00 AM

You are a source of humor and delight thus always the gloomy mood you fight! Excellent dear, Jan. A 7.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/10/2017 10:40:00 AM

I love to make people smile with my fun poems Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/9/2017 8:13:00 PM

How ever ARE you coming up with your topics, Jan - LOL. Very cleverly done, tricky rhymes.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/10/2017 10:42:00 AM

I have no idea where the poems come from Agnes lol I think poetry has been hiding in me for many years, it just took my hubbies cancer to unleash this 'talent' if you can call it that lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2017 5:44:00 PM

Good for ANITA!! That is a word I'd never rhyme with sweeter, but I take it this is how British pronounce it? Same as sweeter? I sure do love your limericks!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2017 5:48:00 PM

the Pugh in the title is also a pun on PHEW! - my hubby's old MD was a Mr Pugh lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2017 5:47:00 PM

yes to me Anita rhymes sweeter lol i would love to hear your voice Andrea then I may understand the differences between our accents lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 4/9/2017 5:40:00 PM

Excellent ~*

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2017 5:42:00 PM

Cheers Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/9/2017 4:32:00 PM

This is exceptionally clever :-) The words are not easy to rhyme and you didn't miss a beat. I only know this as I am still learning and notice degree of difficulty and seamless flow with very witty content. You just make it 'look' easy Jan.:) Very nicely done.xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2017 4:40:00 PM

aww thanks Lynn I struggled with the final line but when I found the meaning of fetor it was perfect for the poem:-) I just love the limerick form its in my genes as my aunt and uncle both wrote funny poems especially limericks:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/9/2017 4:07:00 PM

turn the fan on Peter is here...lol....captcha is cyk(sick)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2017 4:39:00 PM

ha ha ha Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

John Michaels

Date: 4/9/2017 2:56:00 PM

Another classic! Well done, Jan!! Regards, John.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2017 3:22:00 PM

Thanks John I can't resist writing this form:-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo

Date: 4/9/2017 2:15:00 PM

I need an Anita, too? Do you know of my helper-to-be? Thanks for making us smile ... has Ireland lost its town of Limerick to the Isle of Man? (Smile) A. Deo

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2017 3:22:00 PM

lol Anil :-) I simply love the limerick form - I really should visit limerick one day as we do enjoy going to Ireland:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/9/2017 1:03:00 PM

Hahahaha! Fantastic...a fav!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2017 1:06:00 PM

Aww thanks Armand:-) It took me ages to find a suitable word for the final line ... then I found fetor and it was perfect:-) hugs Jan xx