PETER PUGH

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I once knew an old bloke called Peter Whose body could smell so much sweeter He stank of stale wee B O and coffee T’was worse when he sat by the heater! His daughter whose name is Anita Tried hard to help Peter smell sweeter He bathes twice a day She gave him some spray From Peter there is no foul fetor! 04~09~17

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Date: 4/11/2017 6:48:00 PM
Jan, I put a picture of my rose bushes if you want to go see it! took me forever to figure out how to do it.
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Date: 4/11/2017 6:53:00 PM
Oh I'll drop by again:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/10/2017 9:52:00 AM
How I love limericks, Jan, and this one is very witty. I hope Anita stays with Peter to make sure he continues to smell sweeter. Wonderful!
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Date: 4/10/2017 10:38:00 AM
I love writing limericks Carolyn I have written about 5 more today I simply can't stop lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/10/2017 8:35:00 AM
lol! you are so funny lady! great limerick- I always know where to go to get a good laugh :)
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Date: 4/10/2017 10:38:00 AM
I simply can't stop I love this and the footle form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/10/2017 7:44:00 AM
Well writ Jan. You make us laugh. Is your book ready?
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Date: 4/10/2017 10:40:00 AM
I am still writing Victor and I need to edit many of my early poems on soup as I have learned a lot about meter and syllable count since I first started here - it will mainly be poems from soup so I will probably have to remove them so i can publish them:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/10/2017 1:50:00 AM
You are a source of humor and delight thus always the gloomy mood you fight! Excellent dear, Jan. A 7.
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Date: 4/10/2017 10:40:00 AM
I love to make people smile with my fun poems Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2017 8:13:00 PM
How ever ARE you coming up with your topics, Jan - LOL. Very cleverly done, tricky rhymes.
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Date: 4/10/2017 10:42:00 AM
I have no idea where the poems come from Agnes lol I think poetry has been hiding in me for many years, it just took my hubbies cancer to unleash this 'talent' if you can call it that lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2017 5:44:00 PM
Good for ANITA!! That is a word I'd never rhyme with sweeter, but I take it this is how British pronounce it? Same as sweeter? I sure do love your limericks!!
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Date: 4/9/2017 5:48:00 PM
the Pugh in the title is also a pun on PHEW! - my hubby's old MD was a Mr Pugh lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/9/2017 5:47:00 PM
yes to me Anita rhymes sweeter lol i would love to hear your voice Andrea then I may understand the differences between our accents lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2017 5:40:00 PM
Excellent ~*
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Date: 4/9/2017 5:42:00 PM
Cheers Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2017 4:32:00 PM
This is exceptionally clever :-) The words are not easy to rhyme and you didn't miss a beat. I only know this as I am still learning and notice degree of difficulty and seamless flow with very witty content. You just make it 'look' easy Jan.:) Very nicely done.xxx
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Date: 4/9/2017 4:40:00 PM
aww thanks Lynn I struggled with the final line but when I found the meaning of fetor it was perfect for the poem:-) I just love the limerick form its in my genes as my aunt and uncle both wrote funny poems especially limericks:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/9/2017 4:07:00 PM
turn the fan on Peter is here...lol....captcha is cyk(sick)
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Date: 4/9/2017 4:39:00 PM
ha ha ha Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2017 3:28:00 PM
I see that the wind is in the right direction, blowing in to IOM from Limerick! A funny one, so it is!
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Date: 4/9/2017 3:37:00 PM
LOl Ray to be sure I love this form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2017 2:56:00 PM
Another classic! Well done, Jan!! Regards, John.
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Date: 4/9/2017 3:22:00 PM
Thanks John I can't resist writing this form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2017 2:15:00 PM
I need an Anita, too? Do you know of my helper-to-be? Thanks for making us smile ... has Ireland lost its town of Limerick to the Isle of Man? (Smile) A. Deo
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Date: 4/9/2017 3:22:00 PM
lol Anil :-) I simply love the limerick form - I really should visit limerick one day as we do enjoy going to Ireland:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/9/2017 1:03:00 PM
Hahahaha! Fantastic...a fav!
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Date: 4/9/2017 1:06:00 PM
Aww thanks Armand:-) It took me ages to find a suitable word for the final line ... then I found fetor and it was perfect:-) hugs Jan xx