Peter, Paul and a Sangoma

Peter and Paul since grade two were great friends,
They often used to go away with girlfriends for weekends.
This time flew to South Africa on their own
They were excited, they had never flown.
Their aim to find a poisonous snake
Hide it on the plane and then take,
It home, to be their pet.
On their second day they got lucky found a whopper,
The snake was busy eating a huge grasshopper,
They quickly put it in a cloth bag, and tied it tight
But the angry snake writhed, spat and started to fight,
Loosened the knot a little put out his head, 
Got out of the sack and slithered to his home in the forest.
In the interim Giving Paul a vicious bite on his willy
Goodness Paul, not far enough from the sack, how silly
Paul screamed with pain and couldn’t walk,
He could hardly even talk!
So Peter made his friend comfortable and backtracked,
This was his best friend who had been attacked
Found the village they had passed and the Sangoma (Doctor)
Spoke English, Peter spoke to him, oh yes, yes we get plenty of cases,
Most of the snake bites out here are directed at pale faces, said the
Sangoma, for they stupidly have no fear,
Different if they were hunting a young deer.
Only one way to get the poison out, you must suck it hard,
Okay said Peter and ran back to Paul
Did you see the Doctor Paul asked, yes Peter said
And the Sangoma told me regrettably my friend, you will die!


Paul eventually survived, for the Sangoma came looking for the boys
And did the dirty deed himself for Peter.
A Sangoma is a traditional healer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/19/2021 1:21:00 AM
Such a plan, I wonder if they learned anything from the backfire? Enjoyed.
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:49:00 AM
Lol Peter must have been in quite a dilemma!!! Still, Paul had luck on his side. Hope both friends learned a lesson for life. ~ Warm regards & hugs, my friend. // paul
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Date: 1/2/2021 8:16:00 PM
Next time, Peter and Paul might take Mary along to ward off snakes and evil spirits! Enjoyed the narrative, Jennifer. New Year's blessings to you and yours, Gershon
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Date: 1/1/2021 6:15:00 PM
Fun storytelling in your signature style, dear friend! Thankfully for Paul the Sangoma had a compassionate heart. Thank you for your wonderful visits to my page this week. May your cup be filled with unexpected blessings in 2021. New year hugs ~ John
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Date: 1/1/2021 5:48:00 PM
Oh my word you tell a good story Jennifer, a difficult situation for both Peter and Paul, was that Sangoma good or up to no good at all? Happy New Year ~ Belle
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Date: 12/30/2020 10:01:00 PM
Two extremes here, Jennifer, hate snakes love your poetry, You are a wiz of a story teller..keep them coming...All the best for the New Zealand.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/30/2020 10:47:00 PM
Hi Harry, I also hate snakes, but they seem to pop up in my poetry quite often - I think it was Cleopatra who let a poisonous snake bite her and she died' A wonderful peaceful 2021 Harry and please God if we all get the vaccine, a corona free world. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/30/2020 4:08:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … some would say if the snake bit me it would die. This poem has foolery, tension, and humour, so is very entertaining Jennifer - Happy New Year Jennifer - Lindsay
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/30/2020 11:29:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it Lindsay. Guess Peter was in a difficult embarrassing impossible situation but I'm he would have done it if Paul was really dying! May your 2021 be healthy, peaceful and safe, and look forward to a better year in 2021. Hugs and Blessings Jenifer
Date: 12/30/2020 10:22:00 AM
In times of a crisis you find out who your real friends are. Happy New year to you and your family. Tom
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Date: 12/30/2020 8:55:00 AM
A great story, Jennifer. It kept me glued to the page from beginning to end. I'm glad Paul is okay :)
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/30/2020 11:35:00 PM
Thanks Angela I'm 'happy that the poem had you glued to the page from beginning to end ,means you enjoyed it. Thanks for visiting Angela, I appreciate it immensely. Hugs and blessings and a happy 2021 to you and yours. Jennifer.
Date: 12/30/2020 6:49:00 AM
Some might say Paul deserved the injury to his "willy" because he removed a creature from its natural habitat. Enjoyed this light-hearted story very much, Jennifer. I am still away, but had to stop by and wish you a happy new year. May it be filled with joy and prosperity. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/30/2020 11:40:00 PM
That is so kind of you thank-you dear friend , perhaps it was a little karma involved. May your year be blessed with all the goods things you deserve in life, including most importantly health. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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