Peter

there once was a pike they named peter
who wanted to go see a cedar
but a girl came along
with a fishing hook on
and took the fish home just to meet her
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 8:05 AM
Many congratulations Helen on your win in John's fine Fisherman Limerick contest....:)
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 10:26 PM
Hi, helen. congratulations on your limerick win!
Dufresne Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 6:13 PM
congratulations on your win Helen
Phookan Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 9:37 AM
Enjoyed this very cute limerick Helen. Congrats on your win .love, gautami
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations on your win Helen in John's Fishing contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 6:24 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, helen
Johnson Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 10:03 PM
Congratulations Helen. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 9:21 PM
really nice, helen... best cheesr for the hefy win! :) huggs
Freeman Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 8:21 PM
Helen, great to see your poem one among the winner's circle. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 3:24 PM
Congrats Helen on your big win in the fishing Limerick contest luv with this really creative write .. enjoy your sweet success with luv..
Hendricks Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 11:19 AM
Awwww, poor Peter. lol. A witty and clever write, Helen. Good luck in the contest. :))
Devonshire Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 9:27 AM
What a cute fishing limerick for John Freeman's contest, Helen! We don't catch pike in this area. You must live near a lake. Poor Peter met his fate, but I bet dinner was delicious! Best wishes, Carolyn
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