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Petals

Your words are the fire Whose ashes spread sickness To the rejecter whose Plot seems to thin as it thickens. From the coiling stem of a timid flower Daring not show its petals For they've yielded their power. A blossoming hope struck down with gall that shy little flower gets too grand and too tall. But the plague is still spreading From the east to the west, As the winds of the ocean Borrow in mountain's breast. Power, vast power, radiates from it's petals, But it now stands alone in this place of foul weather. Soot has encompassed all the land to be seen, And diseased all the flowers and most of the trees. This rebel, this blooming beauty Is outcast again, for doing it's duty.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/19/2009 5:31:00 PM
Thought provoking and a poem to ponder all the meaning inside. Well written ! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/19/2009 5:10:00 PM
This piece is written to provoke thought and I appreciate that so much. Nice job in this work of yours...
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Date: 1/19/2009 5:09:00 PM
Oh my, this is so well written. Truly many people may feel this way, yet if the flower you speak of is human... it is then mind, body and soul, and even at times one must overcome obstacles mentally, emotionally, spiritually and physically my friend. I ask you is there really a perfect flower or is the beauty found by perception? Uniquely we have our own.If we all thought alike, we would walk talk and act the same huh? :) the real plague is not understanding another human because of indifference
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Date: 1/19/2009 3:48:00 PM
metophorically this is great, so many different meanings could be read into this. Great imagery, origional. Thanks for sharing Judy Riley
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