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Some petals from my garden.

 

Devotion floats in the silence of heartbeats - only lovers savor and devour. I crawled to her like a caterpillar. Cradling in her cocoon - her vision transformed me into a butterfly. She is a love - for whom I've left behind a trail of petals - to roam within her eternal evergreen Eden. In florescent fragility of her femininity. I'm an introvert in her extroverted flower garden. Her sunflower smile, highlights her delightful dahlia dimples. Sensations of her satin skin are smoother than vanilla orchids. Aromatic aura unfurls like honeysuckle, wrapping around my emotions. Her ethereal jasmine scent, seduces me speechless. Lost in her evocative lobelia eyes, desire drinks from the cup of lust, flowing like a fountain towards the lusciousness of her red lily lips - would they be sinful to kiss? I am a drop of rain, resting upon her petal. Craving to be a bee suckling nectar from pink blossoms of her bosoms. May the quill of my pen, forever dip in the juices of her ink. So, I can cultivate within her flourishing fields - forever. Silent One 11 July 2020 This poem was partly inspired by Vijay Pandit's poem called Garden of Beauty. Thanks for the inspiration!

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Date: 11/14/2020 2:21:00 PM
A lovely poem, Silent One. I can picture her from your words :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/15/2020 8:32:00 AM
Thank you.. Not sure why the photos are not showing
Date: 10/10/2020 7:09:00 AM
The rhythm is Calm and peaceful.i love it
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Date: 9/9/2020 7:03:00 AM
Silent One your poetry leaves me speechless! Sublime! So many layers it needs to be read more than once. CLASSIC.
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Date: 7/16/2020 6:44:00 PM
I think love is in all things. Obviously lush, colorful blossoms are sculpted by a divine hand. To observe and become one is a blessed art. Sounds like you have achieved it my friend. Lovely write.
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Date: 7/16/2020 2:05:00 PM
Nice tribute to nature. you spellbound my eyes from the beginning to the end. Much love always. Adeniji
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Date: 7/15/2020 11:51:00 AM
Beautifully written, SO. All of the descriptions are creative and colorful. I especially like "I am a drop of rain resting on her petal." What an amazing image that evokes! Please tell me what flower that is in purple -- looks like a star bursting. Thank you for this uplifting write! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 7/15/2020 3:33:00 AM
May your pen carry on with instructions from your poetic mind.
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Harry..
Date: 7/13/2020 3:10:00 PM
Silent One, your love of the garden was apparent with I first came upon you a few years ago. The beauty that you create with your words is also very beautiful. Your flowing style always compliments your subjects , especially the garden! Lovely !!!
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:02:00 AM
My garden does inspire me.. However, I think I have written too many about petals... Always looking to describe them in different ways.. Thank you
Date: 7/13/2020 1:18:00 PM
This poem flows from one flower to the next so, from one of God's created beauties to another , from the lusciousness of her red lily lips to the blossoms of her bosoms and of course the last verse sums up your awesome write so eloquently. Lovely poem Silent One, Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:07:00 AM
Thank you.. You make it sound even more beautiful..
Date: 7/13/2020 5:45:00 AM
Beautiful, dear friend. I love it. You are always inspiring me as you've been inspired. God bless you with many many more wonderful words
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Regina.. God bless you.
Date: 7/13/2020 3:35:00 AM
I could visualise each line, SO, great flower metaphors used:) inspiring as always:)
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:19:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 7/12/2020 11:19:00 PM
The lusciousness in your metaphors are so stunning and sensual, Silent! It’s always such a treat to read your poetry..wow! :)
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:20:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 7/12/2020 10:34:00 PM
A sensual garden of delights. ... I crawled to her like a caterpillar. Cradling in her cocoon - that caught my attention! Nicely done, Silent!
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:20:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 7/12/2020 3:39:00 PM
wow, such awesome imagery using floral symbols for her delightful characteristics. Very nice work and creative.
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:21:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 7/12/2020 10:15:00 AM
Surely is full blossoming inspiration in this beautiful poem. Well written Silent One and gorgeous flowers in the photos too :)
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:21:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 7/12/2020 5:04:00 AM
You capably and metaphorically appeal to our senses, S-1. Well done! Regards // paul
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 7/12/2020 1:07:00 AM
Nice one, Si; a sensual and evocative piece.
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thank you... Love a bit of sensuality
Date: 7/11/2020 11:05:00 PM
not only in your preparation for sowing or planting you do so in your words. just stunning. Hugs Eve
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 7/11/2020 8:23:00 PM
This is beautiful and sensual. :) Love is in full bloom. It is nice having such wonderful inspiration- from a talented poet and these lovely flowers in your garden. Simply breathtaking. :) Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:24:00 AM
Love and sensuality are at its best when in full bloom, just have to keep those weeds out... Thank you...
Date: 7/11/2020 4:27:00 PM
You were greatly inspired S. O., your flowers look amazing, you must have very green fingers. Tom
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:24:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 7/11/2020 4:03:00 PM
Oh what gorgeousness!! Love, love, love, the pics and the write! :)
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:24:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 7/11/2020 2:20:00 PM
So beautiful , I have no words to describe the tenderness I find here. xo
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:24:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 7/11/2020 1:11:00 PM
I like it. The pictures are a good addition. Well done!
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:25:00 AM
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Date: 7/11/2020 9:33:00 AM
Perfection! One of your best! Panagiota
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:25:00 AM
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Date: 7/11/2020 8:57:00 AM
From inspiration received you have woven a beautiful and golden tapestry my friend. Proving that sweet poetic inspiration from another poet's great creation is truly a magnificent gift and a godsend. A fav.. God bless...
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Silent One
Date: 7/15/2020 11:26:00 AM
Thank you...
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