Pessimism Born Anguish

There is nothing I would not do to assuage
all in you slipping deprived and love awry.

I focus my wishes to diminish your anguish,
to remind you of our perfect designed kisses;
their puckery allure secured our lover’s map
and tapped our wants to ever stay like that.
As a thief, your pessimism slowly robs all
that only tomorrow’s motive may absolve.
Please think of time's appetency to prove
atrocious growls and fussy scowls reduce
to absolutely no substantially lived truth.

I want more romantic years of auspicious
sunrises that entwine you with optimistic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/3/2019 7:02:00 PM
back to say congratulations Cay Cay... :) hugs
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Date: 11/3/2019 7:00:00 PM
Wow CayCay what a great win! Loved this! Congrats!;)
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Date: 11/3/2019 6:25:00 PM
I love love love the way you write Cay Cay, very distinctive style I can tell it is you right away, an excellent entry... congrats on a great podium finish!
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Date: 11/1/2019 9:20:00 PM
oh dear Caycay, you did SO well with the challenge here and how personal you made it. Very good job of this one. I sure hope you win. (mine was very out of left field for me). Soupmail.
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:01:00 AM
I thought this was difficult, but you did it so well. Bless you, dear and hoping you win, Gina
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Date: 10/30/2019 8:43:00 PM
i like the way you penned this one...keep those kisses vibrant and the anguish should stay diminished, in my opinion... locked lips can't growl...well maybe in a playful way they could, but you get the just of my comment... good write my sweet friend... hugs :)
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