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Persephone

Gathering her thoughts within Gazing eyes into the deep Persephone of ivory skin Is lost in memories to keep Her wishes drift like moonbeams Startling the rippling pond Knowing it's not as it seems Desire fuels her earthly bond Persephone has felt the love Of gentle seasons come to pass The angel chatter from above Rings in the ears of this dear lass She bends into the drifting flowers Breathing their fragranced design Lilting moments turn to hours As for her lover she does pine Yet,she has left this earthly plane Heaven's cobbled streets she's trod Persephone cannot remain For she has kissed the face of God By Deb Wilson for contest"Reflection" sponsored by Constance La France~A Rambling Poet~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/3/2011 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win in Constance's Contest, Deb. Beautiful write. Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/2/2011 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 3/1/2011 1:33:00 PM
I remember this one, glad to see it made the winners' list, sweetie. congratulations!
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations Deb on your awesome win in Constance's contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:06:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest.. so happy to be sharing the winners list with a good friend with luv..
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:56:00 AM
Great Job Deb, good to see you in the top 10. Congratulations on your worthy poem's sixth place honor in Constance's inspiring contest Deb. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/26/2011 6:18:00 AM
I am getting so used to seeing wonderful things from you..congrats on another fine win.."bends into the drifting flowers" is such a winner..BG
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:58:00 PM
all the best Deb on your win in the contest.
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Date: 2/25/2011 8:04:00 PM
Such a beautiful name and a deserving win. Many congratulations for this big win.
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Date: 2/25/2011 7:03:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your big win with this beautiful write-----kashinath
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:12:00 PM
Deb, congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with this fine entry.
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:49:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Constance, Deb
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Date: 2/21/2011 6:53:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 2/20/2011 5:22:00 PM
I think Constance is going to love this one. Wonderful choice of name and subject. BG
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Date: 2/20/2011 4:04:00 PM
this Persephone is simply named after the goddess
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Date: 2/20/2011 3:57:00 PM
You have your usual great descriptiveness and rhyming here, Deb. This isn't the same Persephone who was the daughter of Demeter and the wife of Hades, is it?
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Date: 2/20/2011 3:07:00 PM
Beautiful interpretation of the picture covering all aspects, Deb
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Date: 2/20/2011 2:10:00 PM
She was the goddess that had to live half her life underground, right? I enjoyed your rendition of Persephone, Deb. Love that line, moonbeams startling the drifting pond!
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