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Perpetual Rhyme

Just as the ocean’s continuous motion, and sands ever shifting in time; constant the clicking of clock’s endless ticking; this poet’s perpetual rhyme.
From my poem "The Continuum of Time, Nature, Poetry, and Love" posted July 7, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/26/2020 8:19:00 AM
Hi John, Yup, so true my friend, the clock does not stop ticking ever for anyone, unless our time is done! Best of luck in the contest John, Blessings, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/26/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughts and comments, Jenn, as long as my clock keeps ticking my poems will keep rhyming. All the best my friend. Hugs, John
Date: 1/22/2020 1:01:00 PM
A poem in its own right John, good luck. Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/25/2020 5:51:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate it. John
Date: 1/20/2020 3:18:00 PM
Though some of us tend to live in the past, there is no stopping time. I like the images of the ocean and sand as well as the alliteration in the last two lines. Nicely done, John. Hope you are well and enjoying winter weather! Hugs, carolyn
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/20/2020 5:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carolyn, I appreciate your thoughts. So far our winter here in Texas hasn't been too bad; another six weeks and we'll be home free. Hugs, John
Date: 1/18/2020 2:50:00 PM
John congratulations on your win!;)
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/19/2020 6:06:00 AM
Thank you, Bren!
Date: 1/16/2020 8:50:00 PM
Outstanding Verse and best wishes... From Panagiota xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/16/2020 9:27:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota, I appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 1/16/2020 4:15:00 PM
i love this, john! best of luck in the contest...
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/16/2020 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so Much, Ilene, I appreciate it. John
Date: 1/16/2020 1:16:00 PM
Words will always be! Of course they will find you, and wrap around your heart. :) This is so beautiful and uplifting. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/16/2020 4:48:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughts, Brandy, the rhymes are always present within my mind. Hugs, John
Date: 1/16/2020 8:36:00 AM
Nice one John...forever writing...
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/16/2020 9:40:00 AM
Thanks, Arturo, I appreciate it. John

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