'perpetual Flame'

lovely discoveries made on our way to wedding bliss perpetual flame surrounds sealed with a french kiss
Contest: LOve or Humor Contest (Dodoitsu Form Only) 5th Place
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Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 7:59 PM
Congratulations, my friend. I hope to see more of you later. I was so busy lately I couldn't do much Soup! Luv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 4:19 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Laan Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Wilma, Congrats to you too, this is wonderful
Ruebel Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Hello Wilma, Congratulations on your win so beautiful. I love it... As Always, Shar
Roberts Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 10:59 AM
lovely Wilma, congrats on your win
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Wilma, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol
Duffin Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 4:55 AM
Hello Wilma . Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write. . Eamon
Smalling Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 4:24 AM
When kisses speak languages I laugh in braille. Right on, Wilma
Johnson Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 9:05 PM
Well done, Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mannan Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 8:28 PM
so lovely. many congratulations
Haick Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 7:21 PM
Warm congratulations on your fantastic win in John's contest, Wilma!! Passionate!! Love, Annalise
Sweetheart Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Congrats Wilma my friend on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu .. enjoyed every lingering line ..one of my favs luv.. as u enjoy another top tenner tonight too..
Onclaud Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 6:00 PM
yes to this, wilma.. radiant in all ways! thumbs up and cheers for the win! : ) nette
Freeman Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 3:45 PM
Great write Wilma, congratulations on your worthy 5th place. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 3:21 PM
Hi Wilma, looks like you made the right choice. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 3:14 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Wilma
Pettit Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 2:26 PM
You're a winner with this one. Congratulations!
Devonshire Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 11:11 AM
I love all of your poems, Wilma, but this one really stands out to me. I think it would be perfect for Michael's contest. Love, Carolyn
Knop Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Wow, Wilma, En dit alles verseël met 'n Franse Kiss! Great Dodoitsu En ek hoop dat jou ingeskryf vir 'n consteet met hierdie goed geskryf een! Dankie vir jou altyd opbouende en vriendelike kommentaar! Have a great week ahead!...Al die beste, Gert :)
Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 8:31 AM
"Oo la la Wilma. La flamme perpétuelle tiré par bonheur conjugal, notre lune de miel commence avec notre premier baiser. Pragtige beelde van twee in liefde, stygende bogenoemde Table Mountain twee duiwe in die liefde. Pragtige Dodoitsu Wilma ....:)
Kendrick Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed this Sunday morn..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Your presence at my work is always uplifting ..I am glad that you enjoyed my humorous work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Was this for the contest.I think it will do well. But I'd save that french kiss for after the ceremony. hahaha. LUv ya, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Wilma, thanks for your consistence support of my contests, it doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses
Peranteau Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 6:02 AM
Nice hot write dear poet ! *tish* much love, james
Devonshire Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Keep the fire of love burning perpetually and you have succeeded where so many others have failed, Wilma. When you do take your wedding vows, I hope this beautiful poem will hold true throughout your lives together, Wilma. Love, Carolyn
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