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Perpetual

“Some of us are like ink and some like paper. And if it were not for the blackness of some of us, some of us would be dumb; And if it were not for the whiteness of some of us, some of us would be blind.” Khalil Gibran
Am I lost in a secret world of uncharted distant shores, riddling once more in the confusion of Morse code. Separation resembles the mourn of a black rose in perpetual pain perspectives of a shackled heart - with repetitive echoes of empty sentiments. Street lights are no guide in nights that never die, where the painted sky is blacker than black. As carved feathers from wings of hope keep falling, floating in strong winds, drowning in crimson forever rain, composing dehydrated water locked memories. Tormentally trapped in melancholic moments, not wanting to exist in a world where a glimpse could kill. I am all that you cannot see, just a blank canvas. An unfinished poem with suppressed thirsty ink. My armour is my silent fury brewing with thunder. Unapologetically naked, unafraid if lightning strikes. In this wired life, I'm fighting with myself - but surviving. There is nothing magical in the mental joy of living, so I have no concern for who casts the sands first, as my quill cries your name, I am poetically yours, a misfit misunderstood metaphor, yearning for more.

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Date: 2/14/2024 6:18:00 AM
Silent, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the quote too, blessings, Constance
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Date: 1/21/2024 4:25:00 AM
Silent Silent. Hello. I am running of ways to express the worth and value of your work. You are extraordinary a true poet and I will leave it at that. The opening line and yes your closing stanza states why we read. May your poetic pen be with you always. Have a beautiful morning and day. Blessings and Peace always. (smile)
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Date: 1/17/2024 2:51:00 PM
You weave an interesting set of images. I'm thinking you are on a quest for the meaning of life. I haven't found it yet, but just try to be kind to my family and others I meet along the way. If you do figure this out, please let me know. If anyone can, I think it would be you! I don't completely understand your art, but I know it is pleasant to contemplate each piece of the puzzle.
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Date: 1/17/2024 4:18:00 AM
The mystery and even hopefulness of a "blank canvas" is still a possible thread throughout the yearning verses of your poem, Silent One! I'm intrigued with interpretation! Happy Wednesday!!
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Date: 1/16/2024 5:27:00 PM
"In the pain of a shackled heart your armor is your silent fury brewing like thunder", Very nicely done Silent
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Date: 1/16/2024 4:06:00 PM
What a great take on the word perpetual. Sure to be a top winner, S.O.
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Date: 1/16/2024 4:01:00 PM
What a powerful and affirmative poem, Silent One. I sensed your longing and understand the feelings of not being seen and not being validated. This stanza resonated with me because of its strength: I am all that you cannot see, just a blank canvas. An unfinished poem with suppressed thirsty ink. My armour is my silent fury brewing with thunder. Unapologetically naked, unafraid if lightning strikes. In this wired life, I'm fighting with myself - but surviving. Faving. Have a pleasant evening!
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Date: 1/16/2024 3:02:00 PM
Misfits fit nicely in the puzzle of life, when all the right pieces belong. You got yourself a perfect image, just ask God for the glue, lol, :)
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Date: 1/16/2024 1:15:00 PM
You are unique, one of kind, there has never been anyone like you, and never will be anyone like you. Whew!! Creative writing. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/16/2024 12:16:00 PM
The struggle with feeling lost and unseen in a world that is dark and unforgiving revolves around themes of isolation, inner turmoil, and the desire for connection. Your poem is rich and evocative, using vivid imagery and metaphor to convey such an emotional state. Your words convey a sense of longing and despair, with phrases like "mourn of a black rose" and "drowning in crimson forever rain" painting a picture of deep sorrow. This is a fave
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Date: 1/16/2024 11:25:00 AM
SO a very difficult poem to interpret however i feel you have a lot more ink to pour on many a canvas, as you say 'as my quill cries your name, I am poetically yours, a misfit misunderstood metaphor, yearning for more......... in this wired life, I'm fighting with myself - but surviving' Well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/16/2024 10:36:00 AM
"Street lights are no guide in nights that never die, where the painted sky is blacker than black. As carved feathers from wings of hope keep falling, floating in strong winds, drowning in crimson forever rain,..." The "Perpetual Struggle", a grifter Bard kicked along as the witnessing ensues and subdued the payment of dues. Of love. "misfit misunderstood metaphor, yearning for more."
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Date: 1/16/2024 6:59:00 AM
This is so gut wrenchingly filled with emotion. I loved the "unfinished poem with suppressed thirsty ink" and all of your wonderful alliteration thru out. Most impressive Silent One.
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Date: 1/16/2024 6:51:00 AM
Wow! (Sorry for the expression) but! Wow! I felt this so very much and i cant help but sigh and be in awe captivated by the way you’ve expressed here and delivered this in such a meaningful manner that would pull many soul strings and “ melt” many hearts! I love the last two stanzas the most. Where you’ve written “ My armour is my silent fury brewing with thunder“ “ as my quill cries your name, I am poetically yours,“ it screams in eloquence “ i love you” in such a poetic manned which makes me w
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Date: 1/16/2024 6:52:00 AM
wish i wrote that! Sigh! I need to write! Im inspired! Iv been healing from migraines still a bit weak so havent been able to write but i wish i wrote this poem! Its one of them that makes my heart throb! Love it! A big fave it is!

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