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Full of marketable commodities like xebec. Waves of pure affection are slashed mercilessly. Feelings: a sea upon which to wander carefree. Devil swears to be a dove to trick people cursorily. The doll dances on a string of yellow-golden hair. It dyes its lips crimson with the blood of its lost prey. It attracts people with its flirtatious smile and low blare. Because of her, falls even the most religious people. The ashes of destroyed rags cover the black eyes. A sparkling smile covers Beelzebub's smile. Her mistress is responsible for her spiritual slave. A dark soul lurked deep within his radiant skin style. Silicon's enticingly boosted slopes were xyloid-brittle. Sword-like claws dig into the soul in sensual delight. Obsession can be generated by female objects. She does terrible things to helpless people fight. The floral fantasies all turn xerophilous and prickly. Salacious downpours became unending floods of sobs. A terrible memory of a lost love left him feeling empty. The reverberation of her laughing still throbs. Written: September 15, 2022 Tragi comedy Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joe Maverick Word bank: *xebec-also spelled zebec, was a Mediterranean sailing ship that was used mostly for trading. *Beelzebub- Satan, the Devil. *xyloid- resembling qualities of wood *xerophilous- A xerophile is an extremophilic organism that can grow and reproduce in conditions with low availability of water.

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/18/2022 10:22:00 AM

Agonizing to experience the lure of such deceptions, enthrall one's self in the illusion of the tempter than be cast away without pause ... and laughted at for being so vulnerable in one's desires. A passionate poem, with depth and exquisite imagery. A FAV my friend. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/18/2022 2:47:00 PM

Thank you so much, Bill. I'm glad you like it and appreciate the fav. Have a great evening

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/16/2022 5:12:00 AM

I had an intriguing ride through your explorations my friend. Glad you provided word bank to reach your potent words. Best to you, Lasaad.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/16/2022 2:42:00 AM

Magnificent poem on lost love. Thinking that Satan is weak is very, very wrong. Love needs to be strong.

Valsa George

Date: 9/15/2022 9:59:00 PM

Bewitching and voloptuous, female charm can entice and can do terrible things 'digging into the soul in sensual delight'. Once it is lost, its prey is left feeling so empty ! Wonderful poetry rising to higher levels. All the Best dear friend in the contest...

Michael Tor

Date: 9/15/2022 5:06:00 PM

Lasaad this dark magnificent Poetry was a pleasure to read. Your theme and imagination really brought out the creative spirit in you. A fine example of critical thinking in developing and conveying. This one is a fav for me. God bless you my friend. Hope you are well...

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/16/2022 7:35:00 AM

I am indebted to you for the kind remarks you have provided, Michael. Greetings once again, and thank you for including my unassuming poem on your list of favorites. Your comments have shown me once again what a kind and generous person you are. Your thoughts of camaraderie and the words you made were extremely welcomed and very thoroughly taken in.

David Kavanagh

Date: 9/15/2022 1:17:00 PM

I love to see a poet taking their work to another level Lasaad, just as you did here, I’m not even going to try analyse this one, what’s the point, speaks for itself, imo, it has everything a top poem should have, a brilliant write and a Fave, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/16/2022 7:42:00 AM

Dear David, I can't tell you how happy it makes me read your insightful remarks and extremely in-depth understanding of the sometimes-concealed ideas in my poetry. Once more, many thanks for considering it to be one of your favorites. I am sorry that I have not been able to read your work due to a variety of personal and professional circumstances; but, I am planning to go back and read them in the sequence in which they were submitted.