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Permanent Damage

We move on with insult bore but deep inside is a wound still sore. 10/11/16 Sad one line :( - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 10/13/2016 6:47:00 PM

Hi Janis, Your one liner rings true. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Date: 10/13/2016 11:38:00 AM

wow lovely flow and sadly beautiful Janis...congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Janis Thompson
Date: 10/13/2016 6:14:00 PM

thanks, luloo.

Date: 10/12/2016 8:02:00 PM

Oh, just lovely..... Nice work.

Janis Thompson
Date: 10/13/2016 6:15:00 PM

Thanks, Augustus.

Date: 10/12/2016 11:07:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Janis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janis Thompson
Date: 10/12/2016 2:56:00 PM

Thanks very much. Blessings, Janis

Date: 10/12/2016 11:03:00 AM

Yes deep inside wound takes time to heal. Congrats on your win with this fine one liner, Janis.

Janis Thompson
Date: 10/12/2016 2:56:00 PM

Thanks Afzal.

Date: 10/12/2016 10:59:00 AM

Well done Janis, first one I've read that rhymes, congratulations...

Janis Thompson
Date: 10/12/2016 2:57:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie.