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Perfection Is Feasible

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You must worry around acquiring your scheme goal. Is there anything blunder? Rage or yelling controls him. If you have earned respect, have the spirit to lose it all. Faking realness ideas if you face rejection is waste of time. Don't overthink it all; select a tactic and savor the return. Even though you aim to complete all, you fail to look back. Likewise, the extent Oaktree was formed from an acorn. Though views may vary, all ducklings must flap their track. 3rd place contest winner Written: June 21, 2021 Workshop: Adjectives Deleted Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jack Webster

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/13/2021 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I love your creative write and picture. Enjoy your win with blessings............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/12/2021 2:18:00 AM

Beautiful creation. Congratulations!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/12/2021 1:44:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/24/2021 5:12:00 AM

Wonderful entry for a tough challenge. You excelled in this one. Sure shot top winner for me. All the best for contest. Have a wonderful day ahead friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/22/2021 11:48:00 AM

A poem that meets the criteria of the contest. Good luck my friend, Lasaad. Blessings.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/22/2021 9:15:00 AM

Showing your skill as a wordsmith here Lasaad, very tricky contest, but you’ve managed a very good poem here, without our all important adjectives, I’m definitely no match for this contest would need a week to come up with something plausible, and even then be a long way behind you, best of luck, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/22/2021 11:22:00 AM

Thanks David for your so kind words but it’s worth the try, I spent a good amount of time to finish this short poem and I’m sure you are a language master and you can do better, I believe the purpose of contest it self is to get accointances to many different forms. Best regards my friend please check soup mail

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/22/2021 4:35:00 AM

Good lesson for life, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/22/2021 11:24:00 AM

Appreciate your kind words Vijay Blessings and regards

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/21/2021 11:04:00 PM

Well written poem devoid of adjectives. Best for a win.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/22/2021 11:25:00 AM

Thanks Victor your view is to go by dear friend

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/21/2021 9:57:00 PM

This verse is so well composed, Lasaad. The last charming stanza is my favorite, though. Best of wishes for the contest, Evelyn :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/21/2021 6:47:00 PM

This contest is soooo difficult, but it looks like you have mastered it, Lasaad. I had to write several versions of a poem before I could come up with something to submit. I enjoyed reading it and wish you the best in the contest.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/21/2021 7:16:00 PM

That's very true, Milton; I spent the whole day finishing this little piece, and I'm so happy you like it; have a great day, Milton. Please check your Soup mail. Regards and best wishes

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/21/2021 6:41:00 PM

We must strive to be the best that we can be. Nicely penned, thank you dear Lasaad :)