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Perfect Rain Dance---Lento Poetry

Cold rain drops on your face boldly touch your lips with bliss hold my hand, let's do a rain dance old memories ignite our first kiss. Get closer to my mouth dear Let our breaths mingle once Set the stage for a perfect kiss Bet this is our best rain dance. By:kash poet(28th July 2011) =============000==============

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/13/2012 11:19:00 PM

oh yeah!... congrats on your grand win, kashi, and more cheers to you for all the recent placements.. having TPS technical problems, awwwh!..:) huggs

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/13/2012 6:28:00 PM

Awesome and beautiful write,Kash...A perfect rain dance indeed...Congratulations on your well deserved win....This is classic....

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/13/2012 5:40:00 PM

Kash!! Congratulations on your win!! Sultry!! Well Done big hug--deb ;)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/13/2012 4:55:00 PM

Smashingly done! One hot number here, Kash! Congrats on a smooth write! :) Gwendolen

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/13/2012 1:57:00 PM

A delight!! Congratulations, to you Kash!! You are on a roll, and well deserved recognition!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/13/2012 8:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Interesting read.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/13/2012 5:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest P.D. sponsored "Any poem goes~" Kash. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2012 9:54:00 PM

Kash, a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem.. :-) always~ PD

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/12/2011 8:30:00 PM

I love being out in the rain and your verse describes the feeling so well..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/2/2011 4:16:00 PM

Very romantic, Kash and you sure pulled off this form so well :) Enjoyed reading this!

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/29/2011 3:47:00 PM

This is a great entry for the contest Kash!! Good luck to you ;-)

Jack Horne

Date: 7/29/2011 12:58:00 PM

You made this look so easy, Kash - I can't write anything in this form so far!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2011 10:16:00 AM

wow, Kash, I would say you really did a good job with this form. Perfect rhyming so I would be very surprised not to see it on the list. YOu made it look efforless, my friend!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/29/2011 7:42:00 AM

good luck in this contest Kash.. I used Lento Poetry as one of my forms for Constance's contest.. hope it turned out well.. these words begin my day so well luv.. happy weekend...

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/28/2011 9:41:00 PM

Ah yes, to dance in the rain, to nice for words but you did a great job. Sounds a winner to me.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/28/2011 8:56:00 PM

Wonderful entry to the contest with the lento, kashinath

Rachelle S.

Date: 7/28/2011 8:53:00 PM

beautiful writing...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/28/2011 3:56:00 PM

such a pretty poem Kash and such pretty thoughts and images radiate this piece.. good luck in Rick's contest.. u aced the form luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/28/2011 3:27:00 PM

Wonderful creative writing today Kashinath. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/28/2011 2:28:00 PM

need your insights on " from a sacred vase, will ya kashi?..:) huggs, nette

Nette Onclaud
Date: 7/28/2011 2:32:00 PM

i meant "low country", yipers! :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/28/2011 1:47:00 PM

The thought of dancing in the rain sounds very erotic in your lovely Lento, Kash. We'll be having rain this afternoon; will you dance with me? Best wishes in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/28/2011 7:04:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this one..Reads like a winner to me..Very romantic..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/28/2011 4:07:00 AM

filled with sentimental thoight, kashi... a beauty that's a winner for me.. whooo!.:) huggs, nette