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Perfect Love - Contest

perfection in all things
easy, you would think, but not when
re-daunting love is demanded,
forever constant drip of words
eating away my soul, feeling
claustrophobic, being smothered, by
total love which is demanded back

loyalty closes its eyes as
overbearing mother decides my future
vitriol thoughts circle my brain
erased my natural love for my mother


penned 1/2/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/6/2016 4:18:00 PM
Seren, Congrats on "Your Dark Side of Love WIN!!!" XOX ~LINDA~
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/17/2016 4:56:00 AM
thank you Linda...Seren
Date: 2/5/2016 1:57:00 PM
let no one steal your happiness... congrats on your fine win, seren.. huggs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/5/2016 10:23:00 PM
Thanks Nette find it hard to write dark poems... Seren
Date: 2/5/2016 9:20:00 AM
Brief and powerful Seren!Congrats on your placement!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/5/2016 10:23:00 PM
Thank you.... Seren
Date: 2/4/2016 11:58:00 AM
many congrats on your win with this deep acrostic Seren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/5/2016 10:25:00 PM
When no one commented I thought oh oh I am in trouble with this one.!lol..thanks for your congrats... Seren
Date: 2/4/2016 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! A different and sad situation expressed well.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/5/2016 10:26:00 PM
Thank you Susan...Seren

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