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Perfect Kiss

Of all our synchronicity, a perfect pair implicitly, the one thing that I dearly miss? The perfect way we used to kiss. Kissing you was like a dance, full of wonder and romance. Always sure to light a fire, kindled flames of our desire. Always, to you, I'd relent. Such a gift is heaven sent. My wish, if only one, then this, let it be a perfect kiss. A dance like Cinderella's ball, caught in a moment, consuming of all. Gliding so perfectly, right from the touch. Fantasy moments of daydreams and such. Age and time have changed our ways but I'll always have yesterdays. Days I still so deeply miss, when you gave me that perfect kiss. -Jeannie Minor

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Date: 2/25/2016 8:10:00 PM
oh yes, I know THIS feeling so well. Nothing can ever compare to it again, Jeannie. I love this.
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 2/25/2016 8:21:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. Nothing really can compare. It's a priceless fulfillment of life.(I'm gonna use that!)
Date: 2/19/2016 2:56:00 PM
Truly lovely with a strong romantic vein that flows all through it. Reviving memories of this special kiss could well be the rekindling of dormant love! // paul
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 2/19/2016 8:25:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. I was hoping to send a very special Valentines Day message but I guess the signal didn't come across very clear. That rekindling is gonna take more than just poetry.
Date: 2/17/2016 11:53:00 PM
Very romantic, Jeannie ... but why must you only be dreaming? The moments will come to you again if you let it :) Enjoyed your poem, tonight.
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 2/18/2016 12:39:00 PM
Thank you, Timothy. I appreciate the visit and the comment.
Date: 2/16/2016 4:33:00 PM
This is great. That last verse really knocks it out of the park. A7+ Encore!
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 2/16/2016 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. Always such a pleasure hearing from you. Your encouragement and support mean a great deal to me.
Date: 2/16/2016 4:31:00 PM
A perfect rhyme...ah l'amour...great write Jeannie M...with admiration...^WW^
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 2/16/2016 6:21:00 PM
Thank you so much for the comment and support.
Date: 2/14/2016 9:48:00 AM
Totally absorbing Jeannie, excellent altogether and so romanticly lovely, brings nice memories back to one's mind, full of vivid i imagery!
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 2/14/2016 8:44:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon. So glad you stopped by and I really appreciate the support. I've been in a bit of a dry spell with my poetry so it felt really good to be inspired again. Looking forward to reading your work.
Date: 2/14/2016 9:33:00 AM
"Age and time have changed our ways but I'll always have yesterdays. Days I still so deeply miss, when you gave me that perfect kiss" __ a perfect closing!
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 2/14/2016 8:39:00 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and the comment. So glad you enjoyed the write.