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Perfect Heaven

I have seen… perfect heaven It walked through the door Her beauty incomparable, with out measure In a form of exceptional momentous craftsmanship My heart stands to applaud with excitement of its imprisonment Caged in love… Worthy of the pain it will feel in the future Admiration jealously neglected in her presence As it fails to express the pure essence of you I savour your aroma making us one Causing atomic eruptions throughout my being I have discovered true love She walked though the door I am in perfect heaven *To the secret woman I love*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/26/2010 5:27:00 AM
Hey Sid, how's it going! Does the UK observe the trick or treating like in the US? My son wants to be the grim reaper, so I got him a costume and he is ready to go. Your poem is well written, enjoyed!
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