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Perfect Day

Perfect day Sweet magnolia kisses at the dawning of the day Petals of desire flowing soft upon the breeze Scented of affection in this magical display Surrounded by your beauty as we lay beneath the trees Listening to a bluebird so melodic is its sound Harmonies of Autumn soaring skies of velvet blue Lost within the moment in this solitude we've found Dreaming of forever on a perfect day with you Good morning Soupers

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Date: 10/24/2018 2:38:00 PM
A morning treat for me out in the middle of the Pacific where it is afternoon on the east coast. Thank you and good morning to you too! : )
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 2:42:00 PM
Aloha kakahiaka. : ) Thank you my friend once again for your thoughtful comments.
Date: 10/24/2018 12:18:00 PM
WoW! Chris, You have painted such a lovely scene with words. It looks amazing! Viewing this made my day awesome. Now I'm off to work. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis:-)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy this helped you smile today. Have fun at work.
Date: 10/24/2018 10:29:00 AM
What a lovely scene you create, Chris. Your wonderful poem surely brightened my day! Hugs, Carolyn
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 12:16:00 PM
I am so happy it did Carolyn. Thank you so much for your kindness
Date: 10/24/2018 9:57:00 AM
Perfect indeed. I love it. :) xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 12:16:00 PM
Thank you so very much Maureen

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