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Percussion Dreams

percussion dreams echo on fourth of july ‘Nam turns red tonight for Deb's contest

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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 7/13/2010 3:19:00 PM

Congrats on your win in the Deborah's contest, James! And thnx for the comments you left on my write. Later, JA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations James on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/6/2010 1:46:00 AM

a thought provoking write, Jimbo--congrats! --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 1:39:00 PM

Very interesting one, James. Congrats on you rwin. LUv, Andrea

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 9:27:00 AM

Very thought evoking Senryu, James. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 6:37:00 PM

Congrats on your HM Jimbo for your Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this remarkable write and a great honor to celebrate on the 4th in style.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 7/4/2010 1:48:00 PM

Good luck on this Haiku, James. Thnx also for leaving comments on my writes. It means a whole lot to me. Later, Jimmy

James Peranteau

Date: 7/4/2010 1:42:00 PM

Mr. Goff...this write has struck a cord with me Sir ! Not that I was there, yet, the souls that I knew when I was young who came out of battle and left a part of themselves there...and it was quite a few souls which I knew at that ! Make it a merry time dear friend ! james

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/4/2010 9:55:00 AM

Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/4/2010 9:39:00 AM

WOW!!! Excellent haiku, Jimbo. We'll hear the "percussion" tonight as "'Nam turns red." An unwinable war. Hope you have a wonderful Fourth of July! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2010 9:29:00 AM

Sad that their are wars that inflict our men and women with this terrible malady..Some day there will be peace on earth..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2010 8:51:00 PM

wonderful,, the right sparks..enjoyed, have a nice one,,,and the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/3/2010 8:23:00 PM

Powerful Jimbo.. I am think not only 'Nam... but Iraq.. Afghanistan.. worry for my youngest son in Iraq.. think no fireworks this year due to economy woes.. nice reminder ..with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/3/2010 7:28:00 PM

great job!! love it!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/3/2010 6:43:00 PM

A wonderful imagery for the celebration. Good luck in the contest