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Within my view, behold such rare a sight From beauty's glint felled heart doth race to flight Love's warmth takes stage bathed in its shining light That raised fates hope to such a wondrous height Impossible to still the "ifs" that might Must too bare shown such stars from heavens night Nor from this poet's pen with such pleasure write Only Grace from God's hand could gleam so bright. Monorhyme Mania-Contest Sponsored By John Hamilton 08/23/2016

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Date: 9/2/2017 3:47:00 PM
beautiful.What an amazing write
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/4/2017 12:16:00 AM
Thank you Karen...
Date: 3/28/2017 1:38:00 PM
The gentleness of your words is a lovely balm to enlighten ones soul. Beautiful Charlie :-) a fave, 7+ blessings
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Date: 3/28/2017 1:52:00 PM
Thank you again Lynn Marie...
Date: 9/23/2016 6:10:00 PM
Very good write here Charlie, enjoyed the read' P S long time no hear, but I never forget anyone..'
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Date: 9/23/2016 8:03:00 PM
Thank you for the visit Joe...
Date: 8/30/2016 8:24:00 PM
I really like how you wrote this lovely Monorhyme, Charlie. Wonderful flow and rhyme with depth and emotion. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 8/31/2016 6:18:00 AM
Thank you Sandra...
Date: 8/30/2016 3:29:00 PM
Charlie, wonderful monoryhme dear friend..congrats on your placement! :)-luloo.
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Date: 8/30/2016 7:16:00 PM
Thank you so much LuLoo...
Date: 8/30/2016 2:57:00 PM
BIG congrats. the last part is a very lovely end of the message.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/30/2016 3:00:00 PM
Thanks again Andrea...
Date: 8/30/2016 8:43:00 AM
Congrats Charlie, for your placement with this fine piece!! :-)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/30/2016 11:05:00 AM
Thank you Teddy...
Date: 8/29/2016 7:25:00 PM
Hi Charlie, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/29/2016 7:34:00 PM
Thanks Alexis...
Date: 8/29/2016 6:41:00 PM
Beautifully expressed in such a genteel, old world style. Congratulations, Charlie. 2nd line is extraordinary.
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Date: 8/29/2016 7:33:00 PM
I don't think I've ever had the word genteel used to describe anything associated with me, but I think I like it. Thank you Lin.
Date: 8/29/2016 4:24:00 PM
Charlie, this was a special write, congrats on a fine win!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/29/2016 7:29:00 PM
Thank you John...
Date: 8/29/2016 4:24:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friend Charlie...god bless...^WW^
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/29/2016 7:29:00 PM
Thanks so much WW...
Date: 8/25/2016 9:25:00 AM
A lovely poem where rhyme plays a major role, Charlie. I find it very uplifting. Regards // paul
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/25/2016 10:21:00 AM
I hope you found it so, thanks Paul...
Date: 8/24/2016 12:08:00 PM
Lovely monorhyme and I really like the image you chose to accompany your words - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/24/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thank you Jan.
Date: 8/23/2016 9:34:00 PM
Excellent my friend...enjoyed your Monorhyme...god bless...^WW^
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/24/2016 11:17:00 AM
Thanks WW, and peace be with you...
Date: 8/23/2016 3:53:00 PM
beautiful
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/24/2016 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Jack...
Date: 8/23/2016 3:51:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Charlie - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2016 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise...
Date: 8/23/2016 3:32:00 PM
WEll done, Charlie. and love the title and picture to go with it.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/24/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...
Date: 8/23/2016 2:23:00 PM
Great poem Charlie well written x
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/24/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Wendy...

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