Charlie Smith Poet Monorhyme

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Perchance To See

Within my view, behold such rare a sight
     From beauty's glint felled heart doth race to flight
     Love's warmth takes stage bathed in its shining light
     That raised fates hope to such a wondrous height
     Impossible to still the "ifs" that might
     Must too bare shown such stars from heavens night
     Nor from this poet's pen with such pleasure write
     Only Grace from God's hand could gleam so bright.

     
     Monorhyme Mania-Contest
     Sponsored By John Hamilton
     08/23/2016

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Karen Croft September 2, 2017 at 3:47 PM beautiful.What an amazing write Charlie Smith September 4, 2017 at 12:16 AM Thank you Karen...

Lynn Marie March 28, 2017 at 1:38 PM The gentleness of your words is a lovely balm to enlighten ones soul. Beautiful Charlie :-) a fave, 7+ blessings Charlie Smith March 28, 2017 at 1:52 PM Thank you again Lynn Marie...

Joe Maverick September 23, 2016 at 6:10 PM Very good write here Charlie, enjoyed the read' P S long time no hear, but I never forget anyone..' Charlie Smith September 23, 2016 at 8:03 PM Thank you for the visit Joe...

Sandra Haight August 30, 2016 at 8:24 PM I really like how you wrote this lovely Monorhyme, Charlie. Wonderful flow and rhyme with depth and emotion. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra Charlie Smith August 31, 2016 at 6:18 AM Thank you Sandra...

Beautiful Scars August 30, 2016 at 3:29 PM Charlie, wonderful monoryhme dear friend..congrats on your placement! :)-luloo. Charlie Smith August 30, 2016 at 7:16 PM Thank you so much LuLoo...

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2016 at 2:57 PM BIG congrats. the last part is a very lovely end of the message. Charlie Smith August 30, 2016 at 3:00 PM Thanks again Andrea...

Teddy Kimathi August 30, 2016 at 8:43 AM Congrats Charlie, for your placement with this fine piece!! :-) Charlie Smith August 30, 2016 at 11:05 AM Thank you Teddy...

Alexis Y. August 29, 2016 at 7:25 PM Hi Charlie, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Charlie Smith August 29, 2016 at 7:34 PM Thanks Alexis...

Lin Lane August 29, 2016 at 6:41 PM Beautifully expressed in such a genteel, old world style. Congratulations, Charlie. 2nd line is extraordinary. Charlie Smith August 29, 2016 at 7:33 PM I don't think I've ever had the word genteel used to describe anything associated with me, but I think I like it. Thank you Lin.

Winged Warrior August 29, 2016 at 4:24 PM Congrats!!! my friend Charlie...god bless...^WW^ Charlie Smith August 29, 2016 at 7:29 PM Thanks so much WW...

John Hamilton August 29, 2016 at 4:24 PM Charlie, this was a special write, congrats on a fine win! Charlie Smith August 29, 2016 at 7:29 PM Thank you John...

Paul Callus August 25, 2016 at 9:25 AM A lovely poem where rhyme plays a major role, Charlie. I find it very uplifting. Regards // paul Charlie Smith August 25, 2016 at 10:21 AM I hope you found it so, thanks Paul...

Jan Allison August 24, 2016 at 12:08 PM Lovely monorhyme and I really like the image you chose to accompany your words - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Charlie Smith August 24, 2016 at 12:13 PM Thank you Jan.

Winged Warrior August 23, 2016 at 9:34 PM Excellent my friend...enjoyed your Monorhyme...god bless...^WW^ Charlie Smith August 24, 2016 at 11:17 AM Thanks WW, and peace be with you...

Jack Horne August 23, 2016 at 3:53 PM beautiful Charlie Smith August 24, 2016 at 11:15 AM Thank you Jack...

Anne-Lise Andresen August 23, 2016 at 3:51 PM - A lovely poem, Charlie - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Charlie Smith August 24, 2016 at 11:15 AM Thanks Anne-Lise...

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2016 at 3:32 PM WEll done, Charlie. and love the title and picture to go with it. Charlie Smith August 24, 2016 at 11:14 AM Thanks Andrea...

Wendy Rycroft August 23, 2016 at 2:23 PM Great poem Charlie well written x Charlie Smith August 24, 2016 at 11:14 AM Thank you Wendy...