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Pentastich-Pablo's Immortality

He died as all humans die, and yet his thoughts have never ceased... to declare a mortal an immortal: expressing himself with works full of sensitivity and awareness. He lived and breathed that Chilean air, sent from the mixed breezes of the Andes; and sitting down on a warm rock, he contemplated the white peaks of those mountains... gleaming from distance, to instill more tenacious memories. Pablo glorified the human spirit with its unflinching fortitude, to describe the joy or sadness of a certain age; and absorbed in profound thought, he continued writing until death stopped his breath.

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Date: 6/7/2010 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrew in the Pablo Neruda contest sponsored by Raul Moreno. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2010 12:09:00 PM
Nice way to give us a glimpse of that life of this writer. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
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Date: 6/6/2010 3:31:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in Raul's contest with this wonderful write on Neruda's life and times... enjoy the success of victory my friend... with luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/6/2010 3:04:00 PM
Andrew, congratulations on your placement in my Pablo Neruda contest...Raul
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Date: 5/15/2010 7:37:00 PM
Brilliant, Andrew! Best one I've seen for this contest. And I like the quintain form. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/15/2010 12:31:00 AM
Like the imagery of the closing line Andrew.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/14/2010 6:32:00 PM
The first five lines speak volume of the great poet. A nice tribute. I became very familiar with Pablo's work when I was in Latin America
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Date: 5/14/2010 11:35:00 AM
This is wonderful Andrew...you have captured the essesence of this amazing writer! Well done! ~ Carrie
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