Kim Rodrigues Poet Ottava rima

Penny Rich

Birth, with stars in her eyes, exploding with mirth.
Mollycoddled, swaddled, passed off by nurses.
Aperture opens, closes - checking out earth.
The peacock calligrapher inks fair verses.
Not bad for a Penny - they sold a circ worth.
The switchboard oohs and ahhs as she converses.
Under the sagacious skies, each phonation
Recorded in babbles with their duration.

9/24/2022

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Bill Baker September 26, 2022 at 4:41 PM Unusual form of poetry, Kim. I read about it befor ereading your poem. Well written in form, my friend. Bill Kim Rodrigues September 28, 2022 at 1:22 PM This form is so different. You don’t know what you have until you start creating.

Janice Canerdy September 25, 2022 at 2:20 PM Lovely, descriptive poem with a moving message about finding a source of joy, Kim. Janice Kim Rodrigues September 25, 2022 at 5:24 PM Thank you, Janice! Hugs ~ Kim

Victor Buhagiar September 24, 2022 at 11:01 PM Did you spend all your money on the cruise? Hugs. Kim Rodrigues September 25, 2022 at 7:24 AM Of course not…what money ;)

Line Gauthier September 24, 2022 at 8:19 PM Charming poem, Kim ~ Kim Rodrigues September 25, 2022 at 2:28 AM Thank you, Line!