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Penny For Your Thoughts

Penny was lost in the city A passing young lad thought her pretty He gave her a whistle This made Penny bristle She scowled at the lad, what a pity

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Winged Warrior

Date: 6/13/2020 5:04:00 AM

Pennies from heaven...lovely limerick Shirly...best wishes...^WW^ :o)

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/13/2020 10:07:00 PM

Thank you, WW ...

John Watt

Date: 6/13/2020 2:09:00 AM

Nice rhymes and fun title. Things are very different now than when I was growing up...

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/13/2020 10:05:00 PM

Thank you, John I could not agree with you more ...

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/10/2020 1:44:00 PM

Damn! She should have been wearing her mask! Aloha! Rico

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/12/2020 11:38:00 PM

G/day Rico lol! Perhaps he was wearing his mask...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/10/2020 11:59:00 AM

Hello Shirley Hawkins, Penny lost her chance to meet someone. poor Penny. Enjoy your day my friend.

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/12/2020 11:42:00 PM

Thank you Darlene for your lovely comments. Take care...

Joseph May

Date: 6/10/2020 11:37:00 AM

A penny for her scowl, Very nicely done

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/12/2020 11:45:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph, I wonder what would have happened if she smiled ...

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/10/2020 5:51:00 AM

Penny- for the obstacle love!

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/14/2020 11:57:00 PM

Thank you Mahtab, The young lady was not amused by his boldness was she...

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/10/2020 5:09:00 AM

lol.. Poor lad..

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/15/2020 12:23:00 AM

Thank you, Jenish I am having a senior moment this afternoon, I have replied to you three times apart from this time and where they have gone to only they know ... Shirley ( I think)