Pendulum Swings

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Pendulum swings, from left to right For those with mindful eye Moving from darkness, to the light Feral urges decry Free will offers a choice To hark our conscience’s voice Joy suffused, we rejoice Virtue births wings Pendulum swings 13-March-2022 Quietus

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/14/2022 8:15:00 PM

The pendulum swings faster than ever these days, as attention spans shrink to near infinitesimal...

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/14/2022 9:50:00 PM

Hmmm

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/13/2022 1:01:00 PM

Lovely! Awakening and embracing the deep well of truth that lies within; our mantra for life. Beautiful! :)Paulette

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/13/2022 8:17:00 PM

Thank you, Paulette, we must be constantly aware to notice the shifts within, however

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/13/2022 10:40:00 AM

Very nice. You do this Quietus form so well, U.S. I always enjoy them.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/13/2022 8:16:00 PM

Thanks Milt, this form kind of came to me one day, I’ve written several hundreds since then, probably a suitable form these days when attention spans are short