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Pen the World With a Pleasing Mind

PEN THE WORLD WITH A PLEASING MIND Writing and writing all stuffs Who will dare to see and read? Melt pride. Tiptoe fear, don't stop. Scribble, free thy mind. Unfolding rhythm, hymn and songs Hold awhile, value the price of composing the world with A big pleasing mind It views beauty in distress Defying odds to glitter Threading rocky roads with grace Shred, smile. Take a chance From men unseeing skin deep, Some will comment, you're a fool. Listen, but don't notice much Continue your pen Know, poetry is a gift It hugs world and life; it will Imbue changes in your life be grievous, a must? You are wrong, it isn't a must. All the mind and eye perceives is verse waiting to be told Now, lead pen and write! _______________________________________________________ 12:47 am June 16, 2014 Contest: A POSITIVE POEM SPONSOR: ELLY WOUTERSE Originally entitled: A POSITIVE POEM Honorable Mention :)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 6:06:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations on getting the placement your poem did not get the first time... LINDA

Eve Roper

Date: 4/15/2015 8:34:00 PM

Enlightened with your positive outlook 7 and congratulations on your win. Blessings eve

Jan Allison

Date: 4/15/2015 5:18:00 AM

A very positive poem - glad to see it showcased Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 7/14/2014 10:06:00 AM

Love it Olive, good luck in Elly's contest, James :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/30/2014 4:21:00 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 5:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/28/2014 11:23:00 AM

Wow Olive that's a great one ! Congrats on win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 5:57:00 AM

Thank Dr. Upma..:)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/28/2014 5:22:00 AM

congrats Olive, for the positive pennings. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 5:56:00 AM

Thank you Mohan..:) GBU

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/17/2014 3:34:00 PM

A great poem on how to be positive. Well - I try to be. Blessings... Lucilla

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/17/2014 5:40:00 PM

thank you sweet Lucy.. :) and yours too a rain of blessing.. :) hugs .. I pray that god strengthen you more and more.. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2014 3:11:00 PM

Yes, it is very positive indeed! We would say upbeat! Too bad there was a line limit. This is dodoitsu? It's been a while since I did one of those. I liked the best: NOw. lead pen, and write!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/17/2014 8:56:00 AM

thank you Andrea.. :)yes i like to try each form that appeals to me.. :D?!

Tim Smith

Date: 6/15/2014 5:45:00 PM

Free the mind Olive....That's why I write... Hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/15/2014 5:50:00 PM

Thank you Tim.. :) hugs too.. :) i love these virtual hugs.. it gives my dehydrated days here in Saudi a lot lot more hydrated.. :D??!!!! what a description but it is.. :D

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/15/2014 5:06:00 PM

Oh nice nice :) now, lead pen and write! I love it, girl you are cool :) you're words rock

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/15/2014 5:49:00 PM

"oh!!! thank you Casarah.. :) i just tried this one. :) I saw in Debbie and i like this form.. :) it isn't rhyme but i like it i a way.. :D i also like other forms but.. i can;t yet read more about it.. :D perhaps when am not busy again.. work and work makes me busy"

Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2014 5:05:00 PM

Yes....I love the feeling of positivity! Writing is an art which allows a person to come out of his shell...to communicate...to relieve emotions...it's a tool, a weapon; use it diligently and satisfaction will follow. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/15/2014 5:44:00 PM

:) yes.. yes you right let our hands meet and do "appear" lools :D?? you imagine.. :D but you said is true as joining here did lots of things in me.. :D not just with writes but others.. :)