Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Dodoitsu

Pen the World With a Pleasing Mind

PEN THE WORLD WITH A PLEASING MIND

Writing and writing all stuffs
Who will dare to see and read?
Melt pride. Tiptoe fear, don't stop.
Scribble, free thy mind.

Unfolding rhythm, hymn and songs
Hold awhile, value the price
of composing the world with
A big pleasing mind

It views beauty in distress
Defying odds to glitter 
Threading rocky roads with grace
Shred, smile. Take a chance

From men unseeing skin deep,
Some will comment, you're a fool.
Listen, but don't notice much
Continue your pen

Know, poetry is a gift
It hugs world and life; it will
Imbue changes in your life
be grievous, a must?

You are wrong, it isn't a must.
All the mind and eye perceives
is verse waiting to be told
Now, lead pen and write!
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12:47 am
June 16, 2014

Contest: A POSITIVE POEM
SPONSOR: ELLY WOUTERSE
Originally entitled: A POSITIVE POEM
Honorable Mention :)

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Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 6:06 PM Olive, Congratulations on getting the placement your poem did not get the first time... LINDA

Eve Roper April 15, 2015 at 8:34 PM Enlightened with your positive outlook 7 and congratulations on your win. Blessings eve

Jan Allison April 15, 2015 at 5:18 AM A very positive poem - glad to see it showcased Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser July 14, 2014 at 10:06 AM Love it Olive, good luck in Elly's contest, James :)

Sara Kendrick June 30, 2014 at 4:21 PM I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 14, 2014 at 5:57 AM Thank you so much Sara..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 28, 2014 at 11:23 AM Wow Olive that's a great one ! Congrats on win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 14, 2014 at 5:57 AM Thank Dr. Upma..:)

Mohan Chutani June 28, 2014 at 5:22 AM congrats Olive, for the positive pennings. Mohan Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 14, 2014 at 5:56 AM Thank you Mohan..:) GBU

Lucilla Carrillo June 17, 2014 at 3:34 PM A great poem on how to be positive. Well - I try to be. Blessings... Lucilla Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 17, 2014 at 5:40 PM thank you sweet Lucy.. :) and yours too a rain of blessing.. :) hugs .. I pray that god strengthen you more and more.. :)

Andrea Dietrich June 16, 2014 at 3:11 PM Yes, it is very positive indeed! We would say upbeat! Too bad there was a line limit. This is dodoitsu? It's been a while since I did one of those. I liked the best: NOw. lead pen, and write! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 17, 2014 at 8:56 AM thank you Andrea.. :)yes i like to try each form that appeals to me.. :D?!

Tim Smith June 15, 2014 at 5:45 PM Free the mind Olive....That's why I write... Hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 15, 2014 at 5:50 PM Thank you Tim.. :) hugs too.. :) i love these virtual hugs.. it gives my dehydrated days here in Saudi a lot lot more hydrated.. :D??!!!! what a description but it is.. :D

Casarah Nance June 15, 2014 at 5:06 PM Oh nice nice :) now, lead pen and write! I love it, girl you are cool :) you're words rock Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 15, 2014 at 5:49 PM "oh!!! thank you Casarah.. :) i just tried this one. :) I saw in Debbie and i like this form.. :) it isn't rhyme but i like it i a way.. :D i also like other forms but.. i can;t yet read more about it.. :D perhaps when am not busy again.. work and work makes me busy"

Paul Callus June 15, 2014 at 5:05 PM Yes....I love the feeling of positivity! Writing is an art which allows a person to come out of his shell...to communicate...to relieve emotions...it's a tool, a weapon; use it diligently and satisfaction will follow. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 15, 2014 at 5:44 PM :) yes.. yes you right let our hands meet and do "appear" lools :D?? you imagine.. :D but you said is true as joining here did lots of things in me.. :D not just with writes but others.. :)