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Pelicans- Haiku

high in the blue sky pelicans glide on thermals aero dynamics 1st February 2010 Scene from the garden reading 'The Classic Haiku' thank you to Brian

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/10/2010 4:31:00 AM

I love to watch pelicans. This haiku brings me fond memories of running down a pier trying to get just the right photo of a brown pelican...I thought they were becoming rare.

James Fraser

Date: 2/5/2010 4:56:00 PM

Nice Pelican Brief Margaret, and yes Arisaig is a beautiful place, as is the whole of the West of Scotland >> James >> James

Date: 2/3/2010 7:04:00 PM

What a fun poem. I really like the clever use of humor. I can just picture this scene. Has me smiling. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comments. Keep on writing. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2010 1:46:00 PM

Yes, a nice picture you painted. thanks for your welcome comment to me today. KEep getting inspired by that book!! Luv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/2/2010 8:18:00 AM

Nice picture. No pelicans here, but lots of geese and swan. Thanks for your congrats. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/2/2010 5:25:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku Margaret and the visual is dynamic ...interesting species of bird... thankxx for your congrats to me.. much appreciated... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/1/2010 4:55:00 PM

Isn't it amazing how birds maneuver up there! Excellent, picturesque Haiku, Margaret! Thank you for reading and posting comments to my poems. Peace and love, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2010 10:02:00 AM

I can see them in their formation gliding on the air. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 1/31/2010 11:52:00 PM

Enjoy the book Margaret.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.No soupmail in my intray!